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Read MoreApril 7th risesnot like a dawnbut like a curtain being pulled backon a stage that has been waitingfor centuries. It is the day of empty skulls,not dead,not forgotten,just hollowed cleanby the slow, patient erosionof everything that once matteredtoo much. These skulls...
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Thank you, Fia.
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Thank you, Keith.
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“April 7th brings the other kind:
the sharp, unsentimental forgiveness
that strips you bare,
that names your mistakes
without flinching,
that empties your skull
so something truer
can echo inside it.”Powerfully penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! What an amazing write with a flow the moves like the wind my friend. So many excellent stanzas brother, but the one above hits like a freight train. I can relate. Excellent read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The Old Man at the Window and the Immortal Cats is next. Thank you, brother.
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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Day of Empty Skulls and Full Time
April 7th rises
not like a dawn
but like a curtain being pulled back
on a stage that has been waiting
for centuries.It is the day of empty skulls,
not dead,
not forgotten,
just hollowed clean
by the slow, patient erosion
of everything that once mattered
too much.These skulls are not…Read More
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Wow very nice PAR… it’s a story that’s both sad but with a positive reason too. Good job.
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Thank you, it’s just me, versing!
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No problem 😊
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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) posted in the group National Poetry Month
For the Woman I Love and the Men I Adore
The 6th arrives
with a softness I did not authorize.
It walks in barefoot,
carrying the woman I love
in the palm of its hand
so much,
too much,
more than any day
should be allowed to hold.She stands there,
quiet as a vow,
loud as a heartbeat,
and April 6th bows to her
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Read MoreOn the 5th,the myth of the ghostships returnsadrift,unhurried,moving with the slow authorityof things that have forgottenwhat it means to have a destination. They glide across the inner horizon,full of voids and echoesfrom the beginnings of time,carrying the dust of ancient...
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This gives an eerie vibe here and I like the feel of it.
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Thanks, Fia, appreciate you!
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Excellent write again my friend. Keep these stories flowing brother another amazing read. I dig this one a lot. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, Damiano, appreciate you.
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Damn the skull is an empty chalice waiting to be filled. This is so deep with hints of darkness all through it. Nicely done