Thank you my dearest Adira! I keep on trying my best evrytime.

hello dearest Par this is very deep and must have been hard for you to face great write 💕

Wow, PAR! This is really good. I have to say I’ve never seen anyone self-analyze so meticulously as you’ve accomplished here in this series of pieces. For me, the word ‘violent’ in your poem may be slightly overbearing and excessive under the circumstance of your more extensive description. Perhaps ‘forceful’ or ‘foreboding’ … though I do see the intent to create shock through contrast.

You’ve managed to describe something that I’ve never paused to ponder… the power of silent observation, allowing the ribbons to unravel themselves until the package lies fully open and exposed. There’s a self-loathing quality to your piece, but it’s far deeper than that. It emulates the respect and honor provided by a student to his teacher.

Exceptionally intellectual and yet warmly appreciative. Well done.

Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! This is so profound with deep introspection my friend. Wow, you never fail to amaze me. Fucking magnificent write! Appreciate you.

Damian

hank you, Keith, for your words about my words… in a world that needs more and more significance. Appreciate you always.

Powerfully penned, PAR. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

You are great my friend.

Yup, I do see that. This is cool, Par

Love the personification.

Ooh, I like this a lot! I miss reading lists. This would be in mine now!

Brilliantly penned, PAR. Fantastic job my friend, really dig this a lot. Great title as well. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thre are still one million stories to be told.