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Hahaha, beware Lady
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I don’t know why this one makes me think of giving all for love. It’s beautiful in its darkness. But then again, too many don’t see the beauty of the dark
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Yes the darkness contains it all, but how do we see, Thanks Lady
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We really appreciate your support Lady, you’re to tight
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To take on the pain to protect what you hold precious. Beautiful write
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Don’t be so sure this is pt.1 of a dark series. Thank you Lady
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
GOODNESS, TFT!
Now, THAT is a proper Sonnet … it’s obvious you’ve done your homework.
Your creativity sparks, emotion sings, and diction dances. And, I like your use of elision. Could use a bit’a punctuation.
See critique and edits below:I said I don’t do THIS. POems that behave (STRESS-STRESS / a count long)
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V3L4 should be: What’s next, a ballad? Maybe, one or two.
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much appreciated. good luck convincin me to use punctuation 😉
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Now, Syr Bard
Post it so everyone can enjoy your amazing flexibility and creativity with a poet’s pen.
I’ll be first in line to review it for you! ⁓ Richard
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Read MoreA place where no-one walks inNobody walks outBodies waiting to be brought backPerfect the life re-agentInjection to the neckRe-animated victims, running amok They said 6 to 12 minutesBut Herbert proved them wrongThe price was highThey paid with their livesSecond birth...
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stellar ending dearest Keith ❤️
Re-animation… taking control
Re-animation… body and soul
Giving life, defeating death
Brain dead, heart stops
On your final breathI love it…
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Cool. Happy to hear you enjoyed this piece. Great film if you’ve never seen it. Thanks Brenda
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend, always dig your breakdown of cinema. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. Appreciated!!
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I have never watched the movie but your poem tells me everything I need to know. It is powerfully and vividly written and invites to further pondering. Awesome work, dear Keith!
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Thank you Elke. I appreciate it.
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hello dearest Me this is beautifully dark and sad ❤️