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Wonderfully executed. Nice work.
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I like the way the commas
hold the piece together…While the line breaks
moderate the rhythm…Nice metapoetics…
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Brilliantly penned, LDF. Love the flow. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Morewoke up kinda hazyhung-over with desire...wanting you towet my dick with your crazyglaze me with that high gloss premium pussyfeel me pound you so deep and hardgrind you...ground you the bedlegs spread wide...craving for me todo what I do...nut...
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Well hell, this was a helluva a wake up call! 🔥
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Yeahhhh. Let’s start the day off right! Haha
Thx for the support, luv
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You woke up hazy? This is going better than a cup of coffee. Nice.
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Glad you enjoyed Fia.
Thx for the supportNaaj
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Haha! Luvin this comment.
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Nicely done Naaj…
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Big thx Cipher. I appreciate your support 🙏
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Passionately penned, Naaj. It get’s the day rolling right, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Big thx for the support, bro
Much respect
Naaj
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Read MoreHere we are at the nighmare paradeafter hours you hear cries in the nightthe shadows fall as you witness ghosts of the midwayliving dolls steal your soulyou dare to ride the haunted carousel?calliope plays mysteriously in the foregroundthe circus...
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Damn, the last line is like a lid slamming down on a coffin after the rest of the poem. Actually a very valid reminder in this world
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Thanks Willow. Appreciate the kind words.
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Wow, this is a wild ride you have taken us on with your poem! Your socially critical observation of this world is brilliantly penned and enjoyable sarcastic!
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Always sarcasm Sappho. Good to see you here.
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Oof! What a haunting vision you’ve painted us with mere words, Vision.
I LOVE IT! xx
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Hello P.G Thanks for the kind words and feedback.
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Always a pleasure dear. xx
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Thanks Adira. Great to hear from you.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This one has grit, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate the comments Damian. Thanks!!
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Read MoreOne day a dog bit the index finger of his masterthe dog ran off with a bloody finger,before the master could catch him the dog came to a river and went onto a wooden dockthe dog looked down into the...
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Phenomenal write, Keith. I should think he would learn from his mistake, and keep the dog fed. Great story my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You would think, but he didn’t. Thanks Damian.
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S. Libellule and
Liziantus-Marantus are now friends
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You know, if you read this poem quickly, it gives me the impression that she had to get it out because something imminent is about to happen. Good spill