Hi Peter

How are you?
You expressed so much in few lines.

Jessy Jacob

It’s the ones who insist they’re fine when clearly they’re not that scare me. We humas are very fragile indeed

Well you’re right! And sometimes we think we know them, until we realize that we don’t. The mind is each of our own little universe, it’s so vast. Some people get off track along the way.

Powerfully penned, Peter. Another excellent write with lots of layers my friend. No one is immune to time and the effects it has on the mind. Thanks for sharing. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Willow…the words od not come to me and I am a chatter box. Amazing spill of emotions.

Powerfully penned, Willow. Another excellent write with deep layers of emotion and honest storytelling my friend. This one hits harder than a freight train. I concur with everyone above. You took this one to another level. Outstanding read as always. Appreciate you, Sis.

Damian

You can feel desperation and perseverance in every line. Simply stunning.

Thank you, Peter

Thank you, Light 💕

Excellent. Obviously I enjoy story poems the most. It’s in the way it brings the real world into something we all can sense too.
Life is like that, and so writing can be a journal of experience too. This write fills that niche really well.
You are hitting them out of the park a bunch!

This flows like a cascading waterfall.
So much power in each line that it pushes into the next.
Just wow.

Hi
I just posted my thoughts a note to my son. Whom to fuck. Great lines you have written in raw.

I see you are budding poet. Because I see your thoughts connect with a lesson and reality.

Jessy Jacob

Do drop review on my posts..

Hi

I see now scared of chicken to eat.. what made you to draw that horror pic. Anyways I stopped eating chicken. Seeing the cruelty to human i thought I crime will reduce with me stop eating meat.

I see why we are undecided did you decide everything for me no how do I enforce you your heart your way to get what you want where did you give me choice I decided i know you are there fir me but was unaware the way. Remember you have given word and i know love shall show the way. Why do you want my decision you have your own decision. Come with flying colors not with depressed eyes…

Jessy Jacob

I love that you chose a positive message to write of. There is never enough of that. So thank you! And the write is well crafted, full of inspiring lines to lift the reader up. Great idea and great result, Fia.

Great thoughtful writing Fia.
💋

Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write with lots of deep layers my friend. Nicely done. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

This does have a positive feel to it.
You never know, sometimes acknowledging someone who’s struggling could impact their day in a positive way.
One could only hope!

Excellent poem, Fia. This has a positive vibe going on.

I think that too often people know it’s a mask, but they want to believe it’s reality. Because having to see what makes them uncomfortable is more than they’re willing to take on. So we paste on the smile and say we’re fine, and they eagerly choose to believe it so they don’t have to acknowledge the truth. I love that the message in this is to see beyond the surface