I like how this poem flowed. I also liked how you say you are going to search for all the dreams you left behind.

Hello LDF. How are you? Nice to see you here. This poem has magic and lured me in from the start. Marvelous write.

Beautifully penned, LDF. Great read my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much

A love the gentle flow of this and how is plays out as i read it. Truly imbued with that singular magic you have with verse. And a powerful theme of adaptation to the challenged life gives us.

John

I wish the system would notify us when a friend posts something new. I forget to go hunting sometimes. But I’m grateful I’ll still be able to see the words of my friends when the lights in the big house go out. You know I dig your musings, my friend

I agree with Willow this is good. Always three sides to every story. That is the truth

You never disappoint, bro. This vibe evokes darkened moods and shadowed alleys.

Much respect

Naaj

Damian people cannot see until it is too late and unfortunately….We are there. Excellent write.

You are the king of erotic dialogue… truly

Gracias mi amiga. Am most grateful for your crowning me “king of erotic dialogue”. Truly means the world to me coming from a poet of your stature, my friend.

John

Sexy, erotic, sensual. A story that held my interest from start to finish. Outstanding story John.