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Read MoreIs it time I guess it’s time for me to give you information you see Because I don’t know how I was going to work this day Everyday is not like yesterday I know that you’re surprised I decided to do this at this moment Why I...
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Thank you Damian. Well, I actually did this poem free verse on the street walking to work. Its longer than this but I stopped here.
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The inevitable impulse. The opening – “Is it time / I guess it’s time for me / to give you information” – creates a tension between the inner calling and hesitation. The subject doesn’t decide: time decides for him. It’s almost an involuntary confession.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Ignited
You threw the match on gasoline
It was always flammable
It’s stable if not bothered
You did it, though
You struck the match
Watch it light
Then threw it.Did you doubt it would light?
Did you want to see if it was destructive?
You knew it was
The temperature is hotter the closer you get
I advise you to stay away
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Hi Fia, what is the time zone which is being shown in this site. Can you make it universal pertaining to local time of member. Could you give me statistics of how many members so far joined and readers are from which country. I am just trying to analyse your good effort to be with success.
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hello lovely Fia these are powerful emotions you wrote brilliantly about…anger is difficult to me because I have written angry poems to vent… you express yourself very well ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin;)
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write that explains the fury of being wronged my friend. Nicely done as always. This one has teeth and your words bite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian;))
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Explosive write to say the least. Those who like to watch things burn don’t know how bad the heat may get.
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Thank you Wally😊
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
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I sit before you
Blank
Random thoughts
Incoherents sounds
Nothing
Absolutly
EmptyCandle lit
Shows shadow
Places to hide
AloneWhat is happening
I do not understand
I’ve scaled walls before
Beaten away the voidI dont like this
Alone
My thoughts
Have jagged teeth
Tearing at me
I hold it backI sit here b…Read More
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hello beautiful Fia I am guilty of building walls I started doing it when I was a child really now it happens without me thinking and my personality just shifts…I feel your pain beautiful expression❤️
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Thank you Crimsin. I appreciate you and thank you for your understanding.
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Mic Drop!
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Haha, Thank you Damian;)
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Chère F.,
My good intentions solution would be:
Choose someone who whispers in your ear how good you are how talented and how beautiful.When the balance shifts, build wall to keep the good feelings in. And you’ll be as OK as I see you. And let me tell you a little surprise: I’m not the only one who can’t wait to tell you.
Believe me!
Warmest greetings, Gus-
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Thank you Gus, I needed to hear that;))
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Maybe so, dear F.
But you so very much deserve it!
I send or sent (what do I know) love from a small tent in the south of France.
And the more I share it, the richer I feel.
Warmest greetings, Gus
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Excellent way to explain why walls are built, and then they wonder why they are so scared.
Nicely penned.
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Powerfully penned, Fia. An excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Congrats on writing for 30 days straight that couldn’t have been easy. I don’t think I could do it. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian