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      All I'm Asking

      Another spirt in a quagmire Selling off dignity just to get by Inflated egos that conspire Adding layers to a perpetual lie   Sycophants always fall in line Empty vessels lacking a spine   This world so full of sorrow Throwing obstacles in the way All I’m asking of...

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      • It is a bit musical. I wish for a better day, each and every day. That deer lost in headlights is so true

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. A lot of us do wish for better days, that’s for sure. It has a musical feel is on point, it pretty much demanded to be that way, I just followed along for the ride. Appreciate you, cuz.

          Damian

      • I agree.

        Thank you for putting it into words so eloquently.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, P. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Got my foot tapping away from the off to the end and back again .. Nice one too sir . Neville

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It does have a bit of a rhythm. Thank you for your continued support kind sir. Appreciate you.

          Damian

        • I like how this feels angry and tenderly thought at the same time. I like that hopefulness in the dark

      • Damian the fire in the eyes of those zealous followers of the pied piper elevated to guru status is painted in your poem with fire and smoke. Truly a smoking great poem that is as strong emotionally as it is rhythmically. You have real talent my friend.

        John

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Really loved the way you described the write in your eyes my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.

          Damian

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      dew

      tracing my steps in smokejust a whisp of airthat rises as incensedivine in naturebut humanly flaweddesecrated holiness, drawn to what I ought not disturbcrimson spice it is lustperfume to my lovers nosea heady fragrance, to arouse him withinsensuality in...

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      • Incredible! It’s like she doesn’t want to desecrate her sacred holiness even though it begs her to give in to human desires and lust so she transforms back into smoke. Really incredible poem and picture, Crimsin.

        • hello dearest Tim lust can be all consuming…the soul moveable but untouchable like smoke… I love you review thank you graciously ❤️

      • Nice! Enticing and not tacky at all. This is pure poetry, Crims. You did a great job with it. And what a pleasure to read it.

        • hello dearest Styxian thank you graciously I’m happy you liked it ❤️

      • Passionately penned, Brenda. An amazing write my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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      Once You Start

      Why do you keep avoiding all accountability?Always looking to blame others for the fallout Course behavior fueling a total lack of stabilityWaking up to find yourself in a world of doubt Noose tightens as the tension starts to buildThis house of...

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      • You know some people never grow up and feel that the other person is always the one that is wrong. This is definitely on point.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Some don’t wanna grow up that’s for sure. Appreciate you, cuz.

          Damian

      • I had to chuckle reading the intro. I have a friend who used to say “Stop being younger than me, dammit!”

        Reading through the poem I was struck by how powerful it is in its subtlety. You say so much without skirting closer than the edges, stirring thought and almost forcing eye contact with the subject. Apathetic, sadistic narcissist. That’s the person this speaks of…but those terms should be in all caps, I think. Another thought provoking, spot on piece, my friend

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I chuckled when J.J. said it, I expect those kind of comments from him as many summers as we go back. lol.

          “You say so much without skirting closer than the edges, stirring thought and almost forcing eye contact with the subject.”

          Those lines mean so much to me my friend, one of the kindest compliments I have ever gotten about my work. Thank you! It probably should be in all caps, but I was trying to use some restraint. lol. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Such a relevant write… well done dear poet

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, S. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Nice to see you back again. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Sometimes you just can’t understand the motives of people and why they do what they do…why they act the way they do. George Carlin said don’t give a shit about anything. At times, that’s good advice.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree with you, a lot of times I don’t understand the motives of some but a lot of times it’s also painfully obvious what those motives are. Carlin was right in many aspects about life, but it’s kinda on a person to person (situation to situation) basis when that advice works best or is a good thing. Something’s do require attention though. One must stay vigilant. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Empathy is important to morality and also it’s the guiding light of my observations of the world. It can be frustrating witnessing that there are some folks out there who don’t seem to have any empathy in them. So naturally as a writer I write about those kinda things. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • Well happy birthday then, Damian. You don’t look a day older than yesterday!
        Your rhymes are on point, sir. The message obviously, too. But, shouldn’t you be writing about something epic from your birthday?! LOL. It’s a milestone every year, is it not?

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thanks for the b-day wishes brother. Why didn’t I think of writing something epic for my birthday? I guess I’m slowing down a little. LOL. It is a milestone every year indeed. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • I feel every word of this.

        Thank you so much for sharing.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, P. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re most welcome. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Damian you write the theme of selling the soul for wealth with the perfect rhythm to carry the banner of your message with striking power and superb song writing. I love what you do with words.

        John

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Unfortunately it’s a reoccurring theme in a lot of my writes, I reckon it also has a lot to do with what I observe in the world. Thank you for the support. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • This is deeply inspiring, tempered with sagacious wisdom…making keen observations
        without accusations. Using poetry as a crossbow is indeed your expertise, bro

        Much respect

        Naaj

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Brother, that comment was pure poetry and I’m honored to receive it. “Using poetry as a crossbow.” I dig that! Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Hello 👋 Damien this is really deep,
        I unfortunately am living with someone like this who is constantly blaming me for everything and takes no responsibility for his actions.

        Thanks for sharing this.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Lizz. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Unfortunate indeed, you shouldn’t have to live like that, you’re welcome I hope your situation improves. Appreciate you.

          Damian

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