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      Time (part 1)

      Is it time I guess it’s time for me  to give you information you see Because I don’t know how I was going to work this day Everyday is not like yesterday I know that you’re surprised I decided to do this at this moment Why I...

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      • Powerfully penned, Fia. An excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Congrats on writing for 30 days straight that couldn’t have been easy. I don’t think I could do it. Appreciate you, Cuz.

        Damian

        • Thank you Damian. Well, I actually did this poem free verse on the street walking to work. Its longer than this but I stopped here.

      • The inevitable impulse. The opening – “Is it time / I guess it’s time for me / to give you information” – creates a tension between the inner calling and hesitation. The subject doesn’t decide: time decides for him. It’s almost an involuntary confession.

    • Ignited

      You threw the match on gasoline
      It was always flammable
      It’s stable if not bothered
      You did it, though
      You struck the match
      Watch it light
      Then threw it.

      Did you doubt it would light?
      Did you want to see if it was destructive?
      You knew it was
      The temperature is hotter the closer you get
      I advise you to stay away
      Let the…Read More

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      Gasoline

      You threw the match on gasoline It was always flammable It's stable if not bothered You did it, though You struck the match Watch it light Then threw it. Did you doubt it would light? Did you want to see if it was destructive? You knew it was The...

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      • Hi Fia, what is the time zone which is being shown in this site. Can you make it universal pertaining to local time of member. Could you give me statistics of how many members so far joined and readers are from which country. I am just trying to analyse your good effort to be with success.
        Thank you
        Jessy Jacob ❤️

      • hello lovely Fia these are powerful emotions you wrote brilliantly about…anger is difficult to me because I have written angry poems to vent… you express yourself very well ❤️

      • Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write that explains the fury of being wronged my friend. Nicely done as always. This one has teeth and your words bite. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • Explosive write to say the least. Those who like to watch things burn don’t know how bad the heat may get.
        Nicely done.

    • ???

      I sit before you
      Blank
      Random thoughts
      Incoherents sounds
      Nothing
      Absolutly
      Empty

      Candle lit
      Shows shadow
      Places to hide
      Alone

      What is happening
      I do not understand
      I’ve scaled walls before
      Beaten away the void

      I dont like this
      Alone
      My thoughts
      Have jagged teeth
      Tearing at me
      I hold it back

      I sit here b…Read More

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      Rage

      I thought you knew meI really F#*ing believedYou knew meI guess I was wrongI guess I perceived something that was not thereAm I madI wasI was livid because of the wall you builtYou know why walls are built?Out of...

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      • hello beautiful Fia I am guilty of building walls I started doing it when I was a child really now it happens without me thinking and my personality just shifts…I feel your pain beautiful expression❤️

      • Chère F.,
        My good intentions solution would be:
        Choose someone who whispers in your ear how good you are how talented and how beautiful.

        When the balance shifts, build wall to keep the good feelings in. And you’ll be as OK as I see you. And let me tell you a little surprise: I’m not the only one who can’t wait to tell you.
        Believe me!
        Warmest greetings, Gus

      • Excellent way to explain why walls are built, and then they wonder why they are so scared.
        Nicely penned.

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