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Wonderfully executed. Nice work.
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I like the way the commas
hold the piece together…While the line breaks
moderate the rhythm…Nice metapoetics…
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Brilliantly penned, LDF. Love the flow. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreICannon upon canon of societal demandsTaking a stand to reconfigure the figureRecompute figures, formations, calculationsReexamine the mazes of examinationsWhere we became ions, spied-electrifiedSometimes sunshine secretes secrets of shadowsHappily an anomaly - As happy as singing sparrowsThe best thing that...
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I wish I could put this on a reading list. I have yet to get the bookmark to work. Beautifully brilliant, this is
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This is beautiful, Cipher. The bookmark will be working later today and you’ll be in it.;))
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Thank you Fia and Willow…
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Beautifully penned, Cipher. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian..!
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Read MoreHere we are at the nighmare paradeafter hours you hear cries in the nightthe shadows fall as you witness ghosts of the midwayliving dolls steal your soulyou dare to ride the haunted carousel?calliope plays mysteriously in the foregroundthe circus...
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Damn, the last line is like a lid slamming down on a coffin after the rest of the poem. Actually a very valid reminder in this world
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Thanks Willow. Appreciate the kind words.
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Wow, this is a wild ride you have taken us on with your poem! Your socially critical observation of this world is brilliantly penned and enjoyable sarcastic!
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Always sarcasm Sappho. Good to see you here.
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Oof! What a haunting vision you’ve painted us with mere words, Vision.
I LOVE IT! xx
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Hello P.G Thanks for the kind words and feedback.
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Always a pleasure dear. xx
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Thanks Adira. Great to hear from you.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This one has grit, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate the comments Damian. Thanks!!
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You know, if you read this poem quickly, it gives me the impression that she had to get it out because something imminent is about to happen. Good spill