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Drieks wrote a new post
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Read MoreNo stressStressed out nonethelessAvoid eye contactGive my mind a restProblematic mathsKeep matters pressedNumbers in my chestNever let me guess Feeling lessLess than I confessedLess than I imaginedWhen I tried my bestMy mind’s a bad placeCrowded little headspaceBody in its prime...
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Thank you Fia!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics with an amazing musical arrangement that highlights your words. Great hook with that chorus, very catchy. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for the uplifting words as always Damian 🙏
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I do, I do like it!
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Thank you Atticus! 🙏
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Great flow and love how you incorporated math in and out of it. Tight
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Thank you! Glad you liked it!
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We like your music choice and songs, but we always read your pieces
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I love all the shifting gears in the beat!
Your lyrics are always on point chica.
You are brighter than the ray hey hey hey! 😁-
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Thank you so much! Yeah i love EDM. I’m planning on doing more of it. When i was younger i went to all kinds of hardcore and hardstyle parties haha. I had a hardstyle version for this one planned but decided on a more mellow beat.
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Damn Drieks!! My brain was last seen dancing down the way. Like we used to say, back in the day, “I give it a 99 hot beats and 1 finger snapping GOD DAMN!!!
-Curt
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Thank you for the kind words Curt!
Haha, i love learning new sayings 😁
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That is so true we do have to fight for what we believe in. Very good piece here.
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hello lovely Fia good evening thank you graciously we do sometimes I feel tired of the fight thank you for the encouragment ❤️
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Observing everything right now is like an emotional overload.
So much heartbreak worldwide.
Sometimes fighting gets exhausting but our morals don’t let us rest.
Writing is a sanctuary even in the most unstable of times:)
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hello beautiful Adelphina thank you for understanding I told chaptgpt I carry the weight of the world on me and in on me it manifests as physical exhaustion from worry inside deep depression about the current events ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write with an honest message my friend. I relate to this one as I’m sure many others do as well. Sometimes being a writer (observer) is very exhausting indeed. I always find comfort in knowing because of this community and my fellow brothers and sisters of the pen, I’m never truly alone, and neither are you my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read More“Grandma bitching, because boys always hanging around her doorBecause her granddaughter has the title of neighborhood whore, “She has a body count that grows like stage three cancerAnd being a man’s personal pussy party-to...
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This is way beyond sad. She is using drugs and she is being used. Heart hurt on this one. The picture is amazing.
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A lesson sometimes learned the hard way which can lead to a tragic end and a difficult life if the individual does not change their ways.
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The sad thing about the ‘down girl’ is mostly are under age and do not have that strong family at home to guide and teach them.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreWhen you stop dreaming, do you die?When you stop crying, because the well is dryWill you understand that I am more than just what you seeIs it hard to comprehend that I will always be me I was born in...
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Oohhh. Let it rip Fia!!
Love the kick ass vibe chica!-
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Thank you sometimes listening to music gets me going. lol
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with some clever wordplay my friend. Dig the vibe! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. glad you liked it;))
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hello beautiful Fia your strength makes you beautiful…this is awesome and emotive poetry… ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin, you are sweet for saying that.
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Nice rhyming with a little fire Lady, Tight
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Thank you, Me:))
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The thing about wounds is that if we don’t get them clean before they seal, infection will begin the rot. And that is toxic. Fierce statement here, Fia
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Thank you, Willow;))
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You have a strong voice Fia. A voice that says what needs to be said, that keeps it real. And you put that voice into your art. Loved reading your poem Fia.
-Curt
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Thank you so much, Redzone;))
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Damn woman! Who got your knickers in a bunch? LOL
Kidding. I love a good kick ass write. I like confidence! You really got your points across for sure. Very creatively at that.
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Thank you, Styx. I was listening to some music and it got me going. haha
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Fia with a S on her chest. Made me sit right up in my chair.
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Ohhh, love it. Thank you Kay-1
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Thank you so much, nontoxicdart
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Super charged into a poetic poem of powerful emotions for this person who judges and whom in the end your let go with your hopes for their better future. You put great heart into this poem and I could feel your words like a piece of music that kept me rapt throughout.
John
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Thank you John:)
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write with lots of layers my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oh that’s is cool. Drinks. You pick the right music that matches the words.