NAVINA

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October 8, 2026

When human minds begin to fray And souls forget their tune The ones who stand apart and judge Believe they're still immune. But we're all so bloody fragile, Our thoughts can lose their form; No soul beneath the turning sky Can shelter from that storm. Each person...

5 Comments

Jessy Jacob
1 week ago

Hi Peter

How are you?
You expressed so much in few lines.

Jessy Jacob
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 week ago
  
  I’m fine and thanks for asking.
  This poem was prompted by a newspaper article about a woman who changed completely after menopause…..we are very fragile.
  🙏
Willow
6 days, 22 hours ago

It’s the ones who insist they’re fine when clearly they’re not that scare me. We humas are very fragile indeed
Styxian
5 days, 18 hours ago

Well you’re right! And sometimes we think we know them, until we realize that we don’t. The mind is each of our own little universe, it’s so vast. Some people get off track along the way.
Damian DeadLove
5 days, 16 hours ago

Powerfully penned, Peter. Another excellent write with lots of layers my friend. No one is immune to time and the effects it has on the mind. Thanks for sharing. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.

Damian