This is good. The way you opened it and then drove your message home. Nice xoxo

Thanks Fia….some days for whatever strange reason seem more difficult than others but you learn over time that it will pass…..I’m good by the way.💋

LOL great ending, Peter. There’s definitely a lesson in this and you detail it perfectly. Thanks for reminding us each day, and each deed counts.

This is such a solid message. And that ending…fantastic landing!

Thanks Mary……you’re on my heroes list.
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The number of times I wake up in the morning and complain about how I don’t want to do whatever thing it is I have to do that day. This reminded me so much of that. It’s all about the choices we make every day, at least to control the things we can control.
And the twist at the end… really wraps it up in an interesting way.

Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Poetry, or just word doodles are medication for many. The mind finds its hiding place and sentences are comforting to spill. I know some who survive by them.

That’s what my days have been like for weeks now haha

I love the focus you have on the light either the moon or the candle. Enjoyed this

Powerfully penned, Daniel. Excellent write with amazing imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Incredible work, Fia. You’re one of a kind. :))))))

Kee up the good work Fia 💋

Amazing work, Fia. Appreciate you.

Damian

Beautifully penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Fantastic!

There’s a spiritual side to this I think you caught. Really creative writing here. Nice job!

Das ist wirklich ein Meisterwerk, Daniel!
Like Tim, I appreciate the spiritual side of your writing. I understand the candlelight as a metaphor for our own inner light. The light in our hearts allows us to see other persons like they really are, beyond their appearance, social roles or status symbols. Brilliant!