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Read MoreI could never play the pianoThere are too many keysAs my fingers touch I tremble feeling ill at ease“Focus you can do this”I tell my soulBut the teachers disheartening eyesGrips me and wont let goWhen she leavesThe tears begin to...
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Thank you, crimsin;))
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I played piano for years but got bored with it being I had no band to play with. Your words here show a timid and shy player developing into a professional with music in their soul. Music moves people. It should be learned by everyone.
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I agree with you. Sometimes when you do not have the right teacher, it would put a person off from even trying to learn to play. Thank you, Tim
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Great write. Emotionally driven. Well done!
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! You know I love writes that involve music my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian ☺️
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I always envied people who could play the piano. I had a friend who played classical by memory & it blew my mind. I only ever had voice. Lovely walk through the keys here
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Thank you, Willow ;))
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This is a very unique vibe, Fia. I like it a lot.
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj;))
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The piano is a beautiful instrument. It has the power to move people to joy and tears.
I enjoyed this poem.
Regards James-
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Thank you, Knight;))
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The last line made me smile. Guitar is my instrument, but I know how overwhelming it can be to learn an instrument. Playing one a little might not be too hard, but playing it well is far, far harder. Nice work, my friend.
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Thank you, Sam ;))
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Read MoreFive years later. I had become published as a writer. Authoring the gothic genre in poetry and novels. I had written about my near-death experience and it drew local readers in. I happened to purchase an old...
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Read MoreWith wings that dare to fly through the storm of her life. With wings that spread into the gales and dare to cleave through her life’s storm! With wings that carry a spirit of gold had feathered her down into the sea. With...
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I love the second Stanza.
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so lovely dearest Daniel I love the juxtaposition of the raven and angel wings 💕
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Another amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read More“You’re a long time dead,” they say.“Sow your wild oats,” they say.“Live today like it’s your last,” they say.“You only live once,” they say.“Throw caution to the wind,” they say.“Go chase those dreams,” they say.“Adventure is worthwhile,” they say.“Take...
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I sincerely wish the bookmark worked for me, but try as I might it doesn’t. This will be permanently bookmarked in my mind though
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Thanks for reading and the compliment.
The Bookmark feature works but not as it should.The Bookmarks are only being stored in your Browser history and when you clear your history you also clear your bookmarks….just saying.💋
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hello dearest Benny I guess I love our terrible creator because he is terrible like me of me like him…he never leaves me alone though the godly people abandones me right away… you can only do your best and life isn’t a fairy tale I get it with the memories 💕 great write…
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Thanks for the comment.
Memories are very unreliable.They are patched together using perceptions and biases….don’t trust them.
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I wouldn’t mind if we did away with platitudes altogether. It’s entirely too easy for people to quote one of them at you without really thinking of any sort of meaningful response that might better fit the situation.
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“Love & light” or “positive vibes only” also come to mind. Toxic positivity is a real issue….people have to be able to grieve, to get frustrated and angry and complain on occasion. These are unpleasant things that all humans must experience.
One of my least favorite to hear is “be yourself”, which too often means “confirm my biased opinions of you”.
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Hoi hoi
Reading time 12 minutes?
It took me 24 minutes. I’ve read it with one hand!
Lovely piece of work!
Love that you wrote it. Love that you posted it.
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Thanks so much Gus. Happy that you found something in it!
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Thank you, Adria! Glad you stopped by.
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hello beautiful Fia this was so beautifully moving my eyes teared 💕