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Read MoreBled out.Life left me, time to head for check out.Can’t shout.Wife left me, no doubt she took the same route.Nothing but strangers in this crowd...Red pools reflecting clouds and planes.Another bloody out-of-body experience.Mudded by heavy rains. Speeding through these...
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Remind me not to get in a car with you! Wow, it took me a hot minute to figure out what was happening. I love the rhyme you use – feels like an antagonistic relationship peaking with a bad turn. I like how you explore the moment of death, the voiceless reality of finality… except, I can hear you.
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Haha you’ll be safe, I promise!
I put this on paper when I heard about it on the news.
The husband tried to end their lives because he found out she cheated on him.I wrote this piece from her perspective at first but, even though I despise the husband, writing it from his point of view came across way more powerful in my opinion.
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Love the flow and vibes. Great ink
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Thank you for the kind words Nick!
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Read MoreHello?..I see you appear and vanish ever so slow.Can you see me?Will you believe me?-Dad?You have to believe me!My mind is a mess but my eyes are perfectly fine!-I need to rest... he says...One illness does not make me...
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Yes ma’am 🫡 haha
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A hypnotic journey into delusions and visions of madness. You’ve left me strapped up in a straitjacket.
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Read MoreA month ago,I met this man.A guy,I call a fictional man.I want him,for he is not real. He's on paper,but love is what I feel.This year has been really rough.And life has been really tough. I guess I used it to...
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I could relate to this poem. It’s not “stupid”. We all fall for “fictional” men and women.
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I love the way you use repetition in this piece, and the rhyme is really nice. I like the message. Fictional men have no faults, so they are easy to fall for. It reminds me of an old song called Imaginary Lover by Atlanta Rhythm Section.
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Brilliantly penned, my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Vivid imagery an incredible storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian