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Read MoreYoung still I am. Though old I feel. The youthful blushes once there, now forever gone. The fresh feeling of being young, replaced with the depression of aging. How can I get it back? Not my youth I mean, but the feeling of it. That sense of having...
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Middle age is peculiar. You are neither young nor old and yet both. It is a window through which you can see — what was, what is, and will be. How will you choose to look through the glass?
I am in the same position, my friend. Excellent piece!
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Read MoreForever young we are! Feels we are this way always when eye to eye, lips on lips. Forever in love we will be! Be forever this way and forever our hearts melting. I love you, heart you, hugging you so we can feel each other's heartbeat. Romantic...
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Phenomenal write, Daniel. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This feels like young/new love. Nicely done Daniel. xoxo
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You write beautifully.
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Thank you, Alexandria. I write romance, horror and erotica. I strive at making whatever I write memorable.
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I’ve been reading your work. It is memorable.
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Powerfully penned, PAR. Like the depth of this write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate you back!
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For me this started out soft then built up to an emotional break down. Really good Par
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Thank you my dear.
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Read MoreOnce upon a time there was a moon.It glowed brightly.It went down and the sunshine showed up soon. And they shared the light daily and nightly.The moon said,you make me shine.The bond they shared all this time. But the sun said,don't...
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Read MorePrecious, yet brittle like a fiddle. Delicate, frail, alas cracked in the middle. Riddled by plagues, plagued by a riddle. Critically acclaimed yet worshipped by little.Pill popper's delight. Stage fright amongst a plethora of other might be reason why...
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Great job with the rhyming in this… engaging… carried me along…
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Thank you for reading/listening!
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Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Incredible lyrics my friend. Tight rhymes, incredible wordplay, great phrasing, nicely done. Also dig the music. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian!
I’m so happy you like it! 🙏🏻
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This is so good. I can hear this as an opening to a show.
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Thank you so much Fia!
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Love this couplet
“Sanity was the place you thought you craved.
Serenity was a fable purposely misplaced.”You have some great lines in this piece.
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Thank you so much DK ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian