Thank you so much! It means the world to me. Truly. 💕

Very cool! Hey we like you via your writes! You have a lot going on in your head, so therefore you are not boring right? LOL
I like how you search for what works for you, creativity wise. It reads well as a poem, and then the boom as a song.
This is great stuff.

Truly enjoyed the read then when I reached the bottom and pushed play, it completely elevates your write. Honestly, I enjoy reading first and thinking about how it will sound when I push play
at the bottom. It’s like the music aspect is desert after the meal/read lol
Hope that makes sense.
Keep killing it!

hello dearest Drieks we need hope and no one likes me don’t feel bad…it doesn’t matter what circle I’m in I don’t fit one on one I do great in groups not at all… ps I like you I just have failed to comment much of late… this write you should be proud of ❤️

“I’m the echo in a room that never speaks
Nobody likes me
Because there’s nobody like me
I’m the secret even silence couldn’t keep.”

Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics per usual my friend. That chorus above, next level wordplay! Once again your arrangement highlights your words. Appreciate you.

Damian

Oh, my god this is so good! I just played this so my wife could hear you again (and me) and it is just phenomenal! And what an incredible voice! Give her some love, girl. Plus the music and arrangement, everything is top notch!

Favorite stanza,
“Instead finds new beginnings and ways.
Maybe the love we have is represented by a sun.
And a moon that looks down at it fondly”
I enjoyed this.

Don’t forget the scratching of the initials upon a tree trunk!
Wonderful write with plenty of motivating lines so the reader can ponder your message.
Well done.

Brilliantly penned, PAR. Excellent write per usual my friend. Always a pleasure to read your work my brother. Appreciate you.

Damian

Paulo!! How are you? Marvelous piece of writing. Your poetry always keep me thinking & wondering, while I balance on the edge of my mind.

Peace!

The ending is a rock through a window! No peaceful moment within this write. It has an edge throughout. Impactful.
Such a strong write!

Your imagination is a beautiful flowering garden, you are a wealthy man, dear Daniel! Your wording is awesome. You are a master in using the stylistic device of contrasts!

Daniel this is sublime in its dark vision. You have so much to say in your poem here and I for one am really liking what you wrote. Though dark it has a flow that is mesmerizing.

John