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Read MoreThere exists a choker.And a lot of us have it.It doesn't always stay on,but it follows. And sometimes drowns out your surroundings.Over the years,the collar grew tighter.Sometimes,the moon is there to help me. Always,any day.And I became a fighter.Sometimes I can...
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Ghosteen and
Kelly Scheppers are now friends
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Read MoreShe writes with a brutal hand,(there is no other way for the brutalized)truth sharpened to a stiletto pointher words crack skin,steal breath,open woundsand longing.Pages grow lustfully,ink turns to flesh,moans echo in strange tongues,and men stiffen in far-off rooms,their borders...
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This is a great “tribute” write. Accurate with its visuals that it creates
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Thank you Crimsin and Styxian.
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Aptly written, my friend. The poem sitting on the right somehow makes it perfect and even more poignant.
Clay
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Hoi hoi
Lured into this write by the artwork
The artwork is nice, but it’s the write that tells it all.
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The formatting of your poem gave me an “aha” moment. Now you’ve spoiled me for the left side of the page! Very impressionable lines throughout, like “a storm of naked syllables”. How I wish I had thought of that one. Do you prefer “Benny” or “Peter”? Let me know!
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Thanks Kelly….Peter or Benny doesn’t matter.
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Well said. I probably know of which women you speak about. All here are valuable in some way.
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Do I scare you? Lol. We are all damaged in some way. Some of us try to heal and those efforts may damage others. Everything pours out of me and I write it down. Most if it is “brutal” which is how I described my writing around 2000. Now I use “gritty”. You can empathize or just be thankful for the life you have. Most memories or thoughts can be put down to share.
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No….you don’t scare me and I appreciate your comment and the honesty in your writing.
Brutal or gritty has to be written as such.How else can the pain you have endured be conveyed?
That said, I can only imagine your life….you have lived it
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Excellent piece. I’ve read this poem twice and I can feel your passion & respect for her. Well said.
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Survivors demand our utmost respect.
Thanks for the nice comment.
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Cool stuff Fia !
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Thank you, Styxian.;)) Hope you have been doing well.
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I caught a bad case of covid last week! It kicked my ass! It went through my work and got a few of us. I’m all better now!
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Oh man you had the summer vid. I had that 3 weeks ago. I’m glad you’re better.
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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How exciting!! I’m late to the post but the video put me right there with ya!
Congrats amiga:)-
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Thank you Adel;))
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Read MoreThe loneliness of lips as Hollywood scripts unread, tells mother mouth to only speak in whispers Within and without each biography has a margin, but fuck protocol tonight the moon is slut coloured red sensual are the bed sheet library Up and over, around and below what side of the...
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The moon is slut colored red. Yes!!! Love this
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everyone should lie under a slut moon, every now and then!
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hello dearest poet you make me wonder who you are I think you know me from DU…this is so full of hunger and passion ❤️ p.s there were only a few that really impressed me but clearly you are one…
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you do know me brenda. does strangeways rob ring bells? i was terminally hooked to the ‘music thread’
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high Rob and yes you did always impress me 😊
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I like how the poem moves beautifully from quiet whispers to a bold, sensual crescendo. The shift from the quiet “loneliness of lips” to the sudden, overwhelming urgency of the final lines is brilliant. I never would have thought to describe the moon as “slut coloured red” -that vivid, daring language perfectly captures the poem’s alive energy.
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i love how you interpret my tatty words. you just may have inspired me to write something called ‘slut’. that word carries such negative connotations, but within the language lexicon, it is a universal desire scream. thank you romaj.
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hello dearest Benny beautifully written honesty ❤️