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Read MoreHow did I forget your faceWhen I can still feel your embraceHow can I still smell youBut fail to recognize these pictures in which I held youMy disease is the worstAt least that's what people say when they remind...
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Thank you Damian. I always love reading your thoughts on my work. Appreciate you!
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I love a good piano song. This feels very intimate and un-rushed.
It has a great tempo too. There are not a lot of distractions either. Just a voice and a piano.
Just wonderful:)-
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Thank you so much! Your words bring warmth to my heart ❤️
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Adelphina was raving about this to me earlier, so I had to check it out. And it’s really good! Not syrupy or overdone. It’s catchy and very entertaining. Awesome job with it.
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Thank you for your kind words Styxian. I’m so happy to hear you enjoyed it!
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Drieks, I smiled the whole way through listening to this. This was sad but catchy.
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Thank you Fia! So happy to make you smile! 💕
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I man…damn. This is incredibly well done!
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Thank you so much Willow! ❤️
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
If only it was my own voice… Can’t take credit for that. -
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❤️
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We’ve kept up wit your musical success through mutual friends, and we’re truly happy for you. You’re not only creating great poetry but also great songs. Tight
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Thank you so much for the kind words!
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Great song. I loved the piano and the strength of the vocals. Well done!
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Thank you RPM! I appreciate it.
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Wow. Just wow! Another incredible piece. You are doing marvelous work, my friend. This is truly outstanding. Beautiful words, lovely music and all of it rendered with class. I am so glad that HER said I must talk to you. I would very much like to do that.
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Thank you so much! I’ll get back to you tomorrow if that’s ok 🙏🏻
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Absolutely.
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Read MoreI don't know whose idea it was.To make the villains attractive at first sight.Whose choice was it and why? Why do we feel attraction or fly?Oh,and why can't it be the good guy?Standing there,catching my eye. But being attracted to the...
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“Eyelids like asteroids hailing down unto the earth.” Fantastic!
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I get almost the image of the female Frankenstein with this piece. I like it.
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This is an intense write. Lots of raw emotion and great metaphors.
It’s hard to comment on writes like these because of the subject matter.
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Oh goddess, this feels so agonizingly familiar. That kind of damage leaves us so afraid to trust the good moments, the sweet touches, the gentle words. Because those things were once used as weapons. This bleeds vulnerability and honesty all over the page. You are heard…
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Read MoreRoll you hair above your neck let me fortress centuries of love bites upon your skin, where no warrior would ever dare cross our moat The ghost of Caligula haunts my city walls, my heart remains legion; my mind is a bruise which only bleeds kindness, forever chasing...
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I like how the poem casts Caligula -a figure known for cruelty -into a haunting, reflective presence. I feel intrigued and a little unsettled: his brutal history seeps through with a mild, almost playful sadism, yet the poem channels that darkness into a tender, romantic meditation on desire, resilience, and the quiet power of love. Beautiful.
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An artistic and intriguing comment. I lived in the English city of Chester for some time and it’s steeped in Roman history,. Think it may have had some bearing on this scribble. Thank you.
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Passionately penned, Ghosteen. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you D
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Effective personal storytelling through historical abstractions. Your words are both sharp and tender. Always glad to see you posting here.
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Many thanks B
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Excellent lyrics my friend, your work is so authentic and direct. I’m truly a fan, good musical choice as well. The piano added the proper element to your words. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian