This is truth and it is hard to swallow but it is being called out by many. Good write

The sad thing is that you still have many who refuse hard understanding, because they are living in their own bubble.

Like I say. If a motherfucka don’t believe then they can fact check this entire poem. I will never apologize for speaking or writing the truth.

My draft I see AI couldn’t express so well my emotional thoughts.

I complain about you for the life
Which we are seeing now
When you care you also need to give

I complain about you that you are giving much fun than freaking life which you are of with

I complain now about you that your responsibility has risen with much sacrifice to give to make mom and dad to be a dad as like dad and mom care and sacrifice.

I do because you are wasting a dollar for every second and you are not saving a dollar every second.

I beg your pardon for seeing the life what we are going through I must say complaints to you about your self because we ended up with no control of mom and dad…..

Jessy Jacob ❤️

Nice write. I like the continuation of reasons that you stacked in the stanzas. It works well. Solid writing.

Well, you have laid it all out and if anyone had any questions, they need to read this again. Nicely put.

Thanks 😊

Unapologetically penned, Lizz. This is a powerful and honest write my friend. We all have ups and downs in our journey as writers, taking accountability and living to tell the story is what keeps us putting pen to paper. That’s just my opinion though. Excellent work here. Appreciate you.

Damian

Very cool. It places you in front of a crowd, that you are not fearful of. I enjoy self-empowering writes. it isn’t egotistical, it’s affirmation of your worth. Well done.

It’s plain to see you’re a serious and articulate writer. You’re able to express yourself astutely and with no reserves. I envy your unapologetic courage. Great write here.

Thanks. I’ve been writing as a young teen, and as a teen I had no one to talk to, to express myself so I turned to poetry it was the only way for me to get things out. Though through time I’ve become better at my poetry. And I keep it as real as possible.