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Beautifully penned, Peter. It’s the little things. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian and PG….it’s a long day without a cup of tea, so get in early.No.matter what my mood a piping hot cuppa moves it for a while.
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Hoi hoi Peter,
That’s a qualitea poem. Hats off.
Love it a lot. Leave it up to me to murder your language.If you are American: Thank you!
In all other cases: keep ‘em coming, please.Kind regards, Gus
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Thanks Gus and no I’m not American… Australian.
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Read MoreContinued… Alayna came back. She was to be my first appointment that morning and throughout the night before at home in bed, I thought about her. All of her. Her feel, her taste, and that spark of a crush. A...
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Sensational, Daniel! Role reversal at her most punishing! xx
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Thought it would be a nice twist to the storyline, haha!
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Damn harsh ending. This was steamy, and the read was quick. I really enjoyed it
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Thanks. Unhappy endings can be the best endings to a story, haha. Steamy and quick is a great combination of course for erotica, hehe.
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Read MoreI had always heard, mainly from my two older brothers, that one should never get married. Be a player and own your freedom. These words echo still as I have no children and no ex-wife—my own life and liberty....
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I love the build-up, the initial nervousness on Alayna’s part, her relaxation, increasing confidence, their red hot sex! This has to be one of the best real life erotic stories, I’ve read anywhere, Daniel other than my own, of course! I’m thrilled for you, very well done indeed! More, please, mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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More indeed! The build-up is essential in erotica – anticipation heightens the pleasure! And thank you for the kind words. I’m going to be focusing on erotica for a while now as I enjoy writing it.
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I agree about build-up, Daniel, but don’t make it too interminably long like some writers on Inkitt – readers like me will soon get bored and lose interest. That’s why I’m successfully writing flash fiction now – quick thrills for all + instant reaction = fun! fun! fun! xx
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Tomorrow?? We have to wait till tomorrow. This is good, Daniel.
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Simple pleasures, and small feats. Great write Peter. xx