We always blame ourselves, thinking we could have done better. What an emotive piece you’ve captured with the brevity of words that have such a gravitational pull at the heart. So well versed with beautiful imagery, Adagio!

Thank you, Kelly.

There’s so much emotion rolled into this. It aches

hello dearest Adagio this was fun and I liked how it came out thank you for the invitation ❤️

Thank you, Brenda, it was a doozy. .

perhaps some cream in your tea great write ❤️

I see this as someone discovering the blue green glass for the first time. Interesting poem, Fia.

I see it as a discovering of the truth about someone close.
It’s a great write however I interpret it.🙏

Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I love your musings. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

good morning lovely Fia this went from beautiful to dark carried out by the frothing sea so poignant ❤️

Beauty brought fore by abrasion.
An important truth of nature I believe.

Chère F.,
Pollution in its mildest form.
An environmental poem in disguise.
See? That’s the fun of it. To write something small and everyone had his/her own ideas about it.
Pure genius, no matter how you look at it.

Keep ‘em coming please…..
Warmest regards, Gus

Excellent analogy…beauty often disguises danger for the unwary

Very mysterious and philosophical.
Regards James

I love the way glass goes from sharp and dangerous to soft and smooth with the passing tides