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    Weatherman

    Some of us see the rain,more than the sunshine.And I mean, really, that’s fine..eventually you learn to appreciate it.I’ve learned to dance between the drops,as well as I’ve learned to cry in it.but like the flowers and treesI grow,...

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    Suburban Life

    A normal Monday morning in America, circa 1960'sMom's in the kitchenDad goes to workKid goes to school A normal Monday morning in America, circa 1990'sMom juggling three jobsDad's in jail Kid comes out of the closet A normal Monday morning in...

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    Simple

    She broke her soul on his feelings Simple Breaks like glassCuts like love

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    Living on an excuse

    I'm living on an excuseThe night destroys meSo much of nothing racing through my mindI lie to continue each dayNo one knows what I mean but meIf you were to hold my hand,There would be no emotion, no warmthThere's...

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    • Dark poem and interesting end question. Would you enter if I were to lock you in my prison? We all have our own prisons at some point in time. to enter someone else’s is …would be difficult. Good piece.

    • Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Some questions have complicated answers. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Lost Me

    I tried so hard to save you,and in the process, I lost me.Forgetting all the things I wanted,I abandoned my own needs.I put you first,and in turn what did that get me?A knife in the back,and a broken heart,when...

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    • The audio, the image and of course the poem is perfect in it’s delivery and meaning. So much pain and sorrow pour out of this one. Nice work PG. xo

    • The odds are never in your favor trying to save a broken individual, someone that someone else broke. What good to existence is two broken individuals? You’ll never be a pair, a pair of what kintsugi or mosaic pieces. Many will relate to this because of human’s diamond in the rough complex. We’ve all tried to save a destined train wreck, Tight

      • True enough…maybe I just suffer from a savior complex..even after being let down multiple times. I guess I never learn my lesson. Thanks for reading. xx

    • It’s true
      I’m a healer and I can’t resist the broken or else I’m just drawn to what I suffered and I try to teach by experience. Call me a mentor or just call me for dinner. Yin gets Yang.
      Sometimes I’m successful and other times not.

      Never feel bad for trying PG.
      I feel ya

      X

    • Your voice and your words were just beautiful.
      In my experience, the healers of this world were once the broken.They are the only ones that can heal the broken.
      I don’t know if I’m a healer or not but my favourite saying is “don’t let anyone suffer alone”. So,I help where I can and sometimes I get hurt but helping is a joyous experience and far outweighs the hurt.
      Hope that makes sense.
      Terrific write 🙏

      • It does Peter, thank you. I just have this thing of trying to see the best in people. And I want to help, but it’s exhausting when they don’t try to help themselves.. it might be foolish. But call me a fool.. I’ll never stop trying. Thanks for your kind words and wisdom. xx

    • hello lovely poetic one I feel your deep ache and passion…this is so beautiful in its pain and truth ❤️

    • Powerfully penned, PG. This one pulls at the old heart strings my friend. Excellent write and your narration sends the message home. Healers are often the ones most subject to getting hurt, we sacrifice ourselves and our needs by always putting them on the back burner to help others, especially in our relationships. I speak from my own experience but it sounds like you’ve been there too. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thank you for reading my friend!! It’s sad that so many can relate..but lets us know that we are truly not alone..

        xx

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