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Read MoreYou sat on the couch, absorbed in something when I slithered onto your lap, wearing just a sundress. I wriggled around and plucked at your shirt, avoiding eye contact, and blushing a little. So, you knew. “You get cute when you’re...
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Thank you sweet Fia. Just stretching the fingers to see where they end … I appreciate you providing a venue for that exploration.
Thanks again for the kind feedback!
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Passionately penned, Betty. Amazing storytelling my friend. This write is also hotter than two demons fucking! lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Two demons fucking sounds pretty hot. (Are their wieners pronged like their tongues? WHAT?! OMG!)
Hey friend, I also appreciate you. Rock on Damian.
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Hot Erotica Star! xx
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Thank you my friend!
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You’re truly welcome, Betty. I’m published 8x over on Amazon, and I can truly say there are 2 blends of sex and erotica out there: filthy dirty sweary red hot (check out My Pregnant Pause and Joely’s Swim LIVE here) and you write that brilliantly!!! Or there’s the subtler, less crude erotica – like my BEINGS – which sells more and got 5-star amazon reviews from women readers. Might be worth you experimenting? HJ Furl xx
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Read MoreChronic vertigo this fear of heights Not guaranteed to return tomorrow Shadows bend to avoid streetlightsCutoff with no more time to borrow Kicked to the curb by an insecurityMy mind made up many years agoNestled in the middle of immaturityCandle burns fast...
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Once you accept “self” the candle of time, flickers bright.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you could relate to the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Through a repetition to our unconscious mind, we become our own worst enemies. We talk ourselves into defeat and fall into a slot that we can’t get out of even though we know it’s erroneous information.
If I leave my keys in a certain spot for a month, when I lose them I’ll find myself constantly going back to that spot even though I know they’re not there. It’s that constant repeating I previously did that sticks. It’s the same way with self confidence and self talk.
Good one, Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree we are our own worst enemies sometimes. I also get what you mean by the constant repeating as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is good. The opening lines got me. Felt them deeply.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It happens, we’re all human. lol. Totally agree. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian a lot of great lines in hear I feel you my mind puts me through hell ❤️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. My mind likes to keep me on my toes that’s for sure. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Some things don’t need to be spelt out .. but this one most surely did .. I’m guessing a load of people will appreciate the reassurance they are not alone .. Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. None of us are truly alone when it comes to dealing with the conflict of the mind. We all have our battles. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Magnificent poem my friend. Your words always strike a power chord!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“If sanity doesn’t break it has to bend”
Never has a statement rang more loudly and clearly with fact than that one. We’re learning to adjust what we once deemed impossible…to be unjust but still happening. If we pay too close attention, it risks breaking us. If we don’t pay close enough attention, it will take us unaware. We’re walking a tightrope of razor blades these days. I’m finding it necessary to keep my loved ones in constant contact. The comfort of the familiar is a dangerous thing because this reality snuck up on us in a bum’s rush and tackled us flat on our asses. Bend, my friend. I got your back if you need to rest
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That was one of my favorite lines as well. You’re spot on again, it’s the conundrum of finding balance in remaining aware without breaking one’s sanity. It is a tightrope of razor blades, because this regime always floods the zone with so much bullshit. It’s impossible to keep up on a daily basis. That is by design to avoid any kind of accountability on their part, incompetence is their Achilles heel it would seem. Nice to know you got my back. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A brilliant poem, dear Damian! I can absolutely relate to it
We are ourselves greatest enemy. Damned self doubt has never helped anyone, it only blocks our power to take action and stay true to our own opinion.
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Read MorePrince Charming was dragged4 city blocks by his dickDecaying behind blood & urine colored glassSkid marks are vibrant with the city lights shining downShe never moved an inchWhat did you think she was going to do?She was only taught...
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Ouch.. Hauntingly penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend.
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This is a hauntingly intense poem! One of the cases where you can completely understand the underlying motif. Nevertheless, everything in me cries for a peaceful solution.
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Appreciate the kind words Elke. Thank you.
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You are really good at short story writing. You caught the attention and kept raising the stakes. Oh man its good.