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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Well damn. This reads like a whiskey bottle that learned to rhyme. I can practically hear the guitar echoing off brick walls. You really said, “Let’s take a road trip with regret,” and made it sound cool. Brooding in the best way. I’m into it.
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A beautifully chaotic board, fitting for a poem about drifting identities, inner shadows, and the erosion of meaning. You’ve written something that feels like a road‑worn blues song fused with psychological noir.
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I got the feel of a New York City late night blues while reading this excerpt of a journey.
C Train, getting off at W 4th St, an urban couple getting frisky and fussy in public, a homeless man marking his territory,
a rat scurrying beneath the 3rd rail as the lone guitarist curates those city blues.Straight diggin this vibe, D
Much respect
Naaj
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Glad you’re diggin’ the vibe my brother. I was definitely going for that blues feel, that lone guitarist has and continues to observe the reality of humanity in this world. Thank you for the stellar commentary and continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“Dark passenger”…now that’s a concept i like to delve into very much. Relating to this wholeheartedly. Maybe a tad too much lol.
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I don’t know where this one took others, and I’m refusing to check yet. But to me, this reads as those who are watching evil taking the stage and are documenting what they see. It reminds me of a name much in the news these days, and the vile things perpetrated and orchestrated by him. But that one man couldn’t have done any of those things without a lot of collaboration from a lot of others. Many of whom are currently destroying our world. The blues in the shadows fits this vibe so perfectly. And regardless where it takes people, it takes us, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. There is a lot of blues in the shadows these days, and all the elements you mention in your amazing commentary, are definitely sprinkled throughout this one. Sometimes I feel the need to pinch myself these days in hopes I wake up to what’s been a horrible nightmare, only to have reality slap that notion down quickly. So glad you’re back. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Not sure why I imagined a literal cat with guitar… But then it has this bluesy feel, nostalgic, that delta-blues style.
Cool write my friend.
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CasketSharpe wrote a new post
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Damian DeadLove posted in the group Music is Art
“Yeah, we’re runnin’ a little bit hot tonight
I can barely see the road from the heat comin’ off of it
Ah, you reach down, between my legs and ease the seat back.”David Lee Roth
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Betty wrote a new post
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent storytelling per usual really love the layers in your writes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I mean, we had to work. 🙂
When it was one of THOSE nights with the one who got away, it feels like it never ends… god above… it feels like eternity in every steaming breath. Smooth skin and soft breasts and held-breath cries… yeah. It feels forever.
Thanks for dropping in Fia and supporting me. I don’t know what I’m doing right now, but I’m appreciative to have space to stretch my fingers and figure it out.
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What the hell?! You literally described Del. And in another subliminal way that I noticed, because I’m kinda like rain man sometimes. LOL. So what if I’m quirky!
BTW, if I was a female, I’d be lesbian. I get it.
Your erotica is intense and not pornish. That is because you are a skilled writer!
I’m still waiting for more of your heady writes. But I know you’re on a purge. So have at it. Thankfully you’re good at all subject matter.-
Bro, when I said I’d fucking take your woman from you if you were an asshole? I MEANT it. I’d totally steal your woman from you. (She’s hot!)
Thanks. The intimacy is so, so different, and structuring it in a way that was less textbook and more opera is still challenging. I might write for my gay half for a while. (My straight half has had the shit kicked out of it for some years.)
I don’t know what’s next as Betty. I don’t know if she has much left in the way of heady writing. We shall see.
Love you bro. I mean, really. (Be good to your girl or else!)
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She is incredible. So I’m not an asshole just for her! LOL.
“Betty” needs to celebrate being Betty across a few topics, etc. You have a very human way with words that everyone can relate to, and wish that they themselves had the inner voice to get down in words. So embrace it all. You are very well rounded.
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Really love the go between you and Styxian, great commenting. The piece can’t be denied for it’s steaminess, it’s like watching a flick, tight
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This is deep and takes the mind to a place that makes you ponder what we are witnessing today, could it be avoided if we just remembered past events instead of letting it just fade into the back ground