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Read MoreThey were married for a very long timeMinimal love for one anotherBoth daydreamed about the perfect crime. A poor swimmer she was at bestHe thought of submerging her deepAn expeditious agonizing death. He enjoyed her cooking and anything she madeShe thought...
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Thanks man. Appreciate the comments.
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So, in the end, they took each other out. Irony.
In the series called “Ozark”, something similar happened between a husband and wife. They were both plotting to kill each other. He took a knife on their walk, but the arsenic she dropped in his coffee got him first.-
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Never watched Ozark. Sounds lovely. Thanks Dampkitten
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THANK You! I have been looking for where I have seen something similar. Ozark. What a good show!
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Yeah, Keith. You would totally appreciate the series, I guarantee it. Pretty captivating and intense.
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Moooorral of the story?? Trust no one, not even your spouse. Noted lol once again, you’ve blown my mind. Great work xx
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Don’t trust anyone. Not even yourself! Thanks P.G. You rock!!!!
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Means a lot coming from you xx
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Brilliantly penned, Keith. A real match made in hell my friend. Great storytelling. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man. Appreciate it.
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Read MoreIBlack hierophant of the spiral pathWalking right pastThose who scoff and laughRight past – The world’s wrath of the world’s ratsThese words upon those formsso thatThey-may:Transform. Followingthe flowingofThese stormsIICrystalline womb fromwhenceIWas bornintoThis form. UnravelinginTravels – TravelingToA crystallineTombIIIThinking backBrainPlacing passed-pastFrameToFrameInto...
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Fucking dark & wicked. Killer piece Cipher.
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You have the wildest presentations! I like how you use rhyme in your poems.
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Powerfully penned, Cipher. Really love the changes in the format, it mirrors transitioning like music does between verses, choruses, bridges, etc. Excellent piece of work my friend. Appreciate you.
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You really set the tone here and painted wicked imagery with this. So much that I have goose flesh from it. Truly a masterpiece, Cipher. Love it! xx
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I have seen a slightly similar movie. I can’t remember which to put in the comment. Well penned!
Working on the right plan. Haha