• Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity

    Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

    A Boy and a Gun

    She came home from her jobNot a great job, but a jobHer husband has been unemployed for 3 yearsSays he's looking for the right job to make a name for himselfThey don't have enough money to feed themselves and...

    Read More
    9 Comments
  • Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity

    Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

    She calls him her boyfriend, he calls her to fuck

    She likes him because she could see his deep-seeded hatred for womenEvery time they have sex, he thought of himself as some kind of slick con-man, managing to talk his way into her pantiesHe feels like a safe crackerHe...

    Read More
    4 Comments
    • Unfortunately, this really does go down, Keith. But you really described the reality of this pseudo relationship. so to speak. Brilliantly penned, my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I’ve seen too many relationships like this. I think people can be rather self destructive. Abuse can also mess with our heads. We tend to believe that we are only as good as what our abusers tells us. It’s difficult to get away from that but most people live better lives once they do. Great ink.

  • Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity

    Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

    Dance night at the school gymnasium

    He would go to those dancesHe could never get the nerve to ask a girl to danceLike he would really know what to do when he got out on the floorHe had tried dancing alone in his room and...

    Read More
    2 Comments
    • I remembered this one, Keith. This was one of the first endings you threw me a curve. I did not see vomiting while dancing to Foreigner. I like them as a band. But they did have those power ballads. lol. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

  • Profile picture of Cipher

    Cipher wrote a new post

    How High Can You Get Cipher

      Becoming the keeper of the fire Stick stuck into sky like lightning rod, struck From the womb, impeccable desire To the tomb – Enlisting into the mystery Being, being present in the presence of the elements Stark darkness and stars crying in afars Circles inside...

    Read More
    2 Comments
  • Profile picture of Damian DeadLove

    Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

    Snowy Days

    She can snare you with a gleam in her eye Dead before you even hit the floor Serpents scream while angels begin to cry Tangled in the web of wanting more   Empty heart so cold like a November rain Feel the ache growing in...

    Read More
    7 Comments
    • Wow, you gave me bits and pieces of a fairy tale example, Little Red Riding Hood. This is good.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I never thought of it like that, I had to reread it after reading your comment, I see it as well. Nice interpretation. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Magnificent piece Damian. Great description my friend.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • As a former redhead I had to smile at the redhead reference. The chill you build in this is palpable. But where would we be without our muse? Mine can be a technicolor bitch but I’d be lost without her. The places you take us, my friend…

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Yes, they are always guiding us along the path of creativity, indeed. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

  • Load More Posts

My Friends

Profile Photo
Aldo Kraas
@poetaldo256
Profile Photo
D. Ignatov
@ignatov
Profile Photo
Betty
@betty
Profile Photo
Damian DeadLove
@damiandeadlove
Profile Photo
Poetic Gawdess
@poeticgawdess

My Recent Posts

Petulant Child

Third Eye

New Report

Close