Mstrmnd1923

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March 31, 2026

I'm so sick and tired of hearing youSo much that I don't know what to doI don't think you're handsome, pretty, or smartI could find your personality cheap at the mini-mart You think you're clever, funny, and kindPeople like you...

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Fia Naturie
2 weeks, 6 days ago

Well hell you were feeling upset with this one and you let them have it. Strong piece, like it
- Visions_of_Insanity
  2 weeks, 5 days ago
  
  Thanks Fia.
Rosie C
2 weeks, 6 days ago

I admire your anger throughout this piece.

I bet this was an emotional release for you. A well needed one.

I enjoyed the strong use of rhymes, it added to the poetic flow.

A Solid and captivating read. x
- Visions_of_Insanity
  2 weeks, 5 days ago
  
  Thank you. Appreciate the feedback.
Crimsin
2 weeks, 5 days ago

you sound like an instrument of destruction here dearest Keith I love it ❤️
- Visions_of_Insanity
  2 weeks, 5 days ago
  
  Hello Brenda. Thanks for the kind words. xox
Damian DeadLove
2 weeks, 5 days ago

Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend this is vintage you in your element here! You’ve been missed brother. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  2 weeks, 5 days ago
  
  Thanks Damian. Peace to you!

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