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I’m so glad you think so, Peter! Thank you!
xoxo
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![Profile picture of Poetic Gawdess]()
A beautiful description of the transition to the afterlife. I’ve got chills, morbidly beautiful. I’ve enjoyed this, well done D.K xx
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I’m so glad you liked it, PG! Thank you!
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The last stanza, I got the chills. Nice. Xoxo
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I love giving you chills!
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Sheesh! This gave me Bram’s Dracula vibes! Excellent!
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I’m a huge fan of that movie, though I haven’t read the book. That’s on my bucket list.
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Yes! A Beautiful film and book. “)
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oh Peter… you haven’t seen anything yet… this woman is a witch…
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Noooooo!!! Peter! Peter! (pumpkin eater)… I’m a GOOD witch, Peter! I’m the GOOD witch of the North or maybe it’s the South. Shit! Which fucking direction? Come back here! Come back!
Dammit, Sam! I was ‘THIS’ close, and you ruined it. I should never have taken that apple out of your mouth until I was ready to sit on your face.
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The whole piece is fantastic 👏 and the last stanza is remarkable poetry! Bravo!
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Wow, thank you, Daniel. I love your comments. Truly, I do. Thanks for following me!
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Dark. My bed sheets will be over my head tonight after reading this. Nice!
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Oh, stop it, Keith. Pull your sheet down. I want to get a look at your neck and… wait, what is this? A tent pole?
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a tent pole is raised at night and in the morning. Come see what lurks beneath my sheets!!
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That thing operates just like clockwork
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Oh stop, Mr. Dragon! Your poetry is amazing… publication worthy. You have incredible depth and vision. I always love you insight on my stuff! Thank you!
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Damn girl, you’re good with metaphor. Love that last stanza, it’s killer..
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Wow, thank you so much, Pandy! I’m honored. Thanks for reading!
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You’re welcome. It was an enjoyable read!
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Read MoreIBlack hierophant of the spiral pathWalking right pastThose who scoff and laughRight past – The world’s wrath of the world’s ratsThese words upon those formsso thatThey-may:Transform. Followingthe flowingofThese stormsIICrystalline womb fromwhenceIWas bornintoThis form. UnravelinginTravels – TravelingToA crystallineTombIIIThinking backBrainPlacing passed-pastFrameToFrameInto...
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Fucking dark & wicked. Killer piece Cipher.
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You have the wildest presentations! I like how you use rhyme in your poems.
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Powerfully penned, Cipher. Really love the changes in the format, it mirrors transitioning like music does between verses, choruses, bridges, etc. Excellent piece of work my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You really set the tone here and painted wicked imagery with this. So much that I have goose flesh from it. Truly a masterpiece, Cipher. Love it! xx
~P.G💋
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You’re getting good at this😉