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D. Ignatov and
Fia Naturie are now friends
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Thank you! I love evoking emotions in readers.
But in “The Blue Lagoon” (part two), the heroes actually survived. In my story – no. No chance 😉
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I agree with Al this was unsettling. Well written and conveyed allot not leaving the mind to wonder what happened next.
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Thank you 🙂
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Read MoreVika carelessly pulled her jacket over herself, habitually wrapped a scarf around her neck, and left the apartment. Even this now seemed unnecessary and excessive. Why bother? With the decision made, it was completely pointless. Except perhaps to smoke...
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What a story. I like the banter back and forth between them and how she actually listened to the old man when he talked. The conversation about brings loved one’s back is one I find interesting because would they want to come back to this world in the state it is in? Welcome to Stars Rite
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked the story 🙂
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Powerfully penned, D. Excellent storytelling my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Interest concept for a short story. The search for immortality in technology. It’s right around the corner which makes this write right on time! Enjoyed the read.
My finance very much wants to have his consciousness downloaded and saved. I’m not so sure. Lol
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Thank you for your kind words. I think one way or another we’ll all become immortal in the stars 🙂
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Read MoreShe came up behind me as I was taking off my makeup, and wrapped her arms around my waist. “Vienes a la cama, Amor?” Are you coming to bed, love? I smiled and closed my eyes. She didn’t initiate often, but fuck. Just...
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Based on this artiusing piece, I think in my next life I’d like to be a woman.
Great write.
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Thanks Peter, it’s the fucking best.
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent storytelling per usual really love the layers in your writes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. It’s so much harder for me to write this narrative voice, and I appreciate that you foind nuance.
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Stinking, reeking, sweating womanly sex – so hot my knees are trembling!
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Mine were too. WLW smells like gardenias and jasmine… fucking glorious shit.
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Gardenias and Jasmine! Aren’t you the lucky one, girl?! Cherish the moment! Harriet-Jacqui Furl writing as HJ Furl on Amazon.
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Why, why did this have to end? lol I know life continues but this is hot.
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I mean, we had to work. 🙂
When it was one of THOSE nights with the one who got away, it feels like it never ends… god above… it feels like eternity in every steaming breath. Smooth skin and soft breasts and held-breath cries… yeah. It feels forever.
Thanks for dropping in Fia and supporting me. I don’t know what I’m doing right now, but I’m appreciative to have space to stretch my fingers and figure it out.
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You are welcome to do that here. Betty
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What the hell?! You literally described Del. And in another subliminal way that I noticed, because I’m kinda like rain man sometimes. LOL. So what if I’m quirky!
BTW, if I was a female, I’d be lesbian. I get it.
Your erotica is intense and not pornish. That is because you are a skilled writer!
I’m still waiting for more of your heady writes. But I know you’re on a purge. So have at it. Thankfully you’re good at all subject matter.-
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Bro, when I said I’d fucking take your woman from you if you were an asshole? I MEANT it. I’d totally steal your woman from you. (She’s hot!)
Thanks. The intimacy is so, so different, and structuring it in a way that was less textbook and more opera is still challenging. I might write for my gay half for a while. (My straight half has had the shit kicked out of it for some years.)
I don’t know what’s next as Betty. I don’t know if she has much left in the way of heady writing. We shall see.
Love you bro. I mean, really. (Be good to your girl or else!)
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She is incredible. So I’m not an asshole just for her! LOL.
“Betty” needs to celebrate being Betty across a few topics, etc. You have a very human way with words that everyone can relate to, and wish that they themselves had the inner voice to get down in words. So embrace it all. You are very well rounded.
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Really love the go between you and Styxian, great commenting. The piece can’t be denied for it’s steaminess, it’s like watching a flick, tight
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Styx is seriously my brother-from-another-mother. Glad you dug it my friend. Really glad.
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Read MoreFriday the 13th AnnouncementGreetings everybody. I hope you are all well. Alive and well. :). These days you just never know when you will breathe your last breath.As you are aware, we are approaching the one year anniversary of...
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Interesting….hey, a thousand bucks is a thousand bucks. I’ve never been one for contests but you never know…..thank you!!
Hope you are doing well and thriving this Friday 13th!!!
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I’m interested dearest Cipher it’s pretty cool you’re doing this I miss DU a lot I’m happy you are here ❤️
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Hey both of you…
I was thinking of the logistics of such a contest…
I don’t even know how many former DUP members would be interested…
So I am thinking of doing maybe just an open book contest, not necessarily former DU members…
Will keep you posted…
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Unsettling and very depressing, Dmitry. All those post-apocalyptic stories are horrid in their own way, but this was extra painful as the main characters were kids. Your story reminded me of the movie The Blue Lagoon from 1980. Two teenagers stranded on a deserted island and tried to cope with the situation the best they could. They even had a baby of their own, and at some point they saw no other way out, and decided to end their lives by eating some poisonous berries …
Al