Based on this artiusing piece, I think in my next life I’d like to be a woman.
Great write.
👍

Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent storytelling per usual really love the layers in your writes. Appreciate you.

Damian

Stinking, reeking, sweating womanly sex – so hot my knees are trembling!

Gardenias and Jasmine! Aren’t you the lucky one, girl?! Cherish the moment! Harriet-Jacqui Furl writing as HJ Furl on Amazon.

Why, why did this have to end? lol I know life continues but this is hot.

What the hell?! You literally described Del. And in another subliminal way that I noticed, because I’m kinda like rain man sometimes. LOL. So what if I’m quirky!
BTW, if I was a female, I’d be lesbian. I get it.
Your erotica is intense and not pornish. That is because you are a skilled writer!
I’m still waiting for more of your heady writes. But I know you’re on a purge. So have at it. Thankfully you’re good at all subject matter.

She is incredible. So I’m not an asshole just for her! LOL.

“Betty” needs to celebrate being Betty across a few topics, etc. You have a very human way with words that everyone can relate to, and wish that they themselves had the inner voice to get down in words. So embrace it all. You are very well rounded.

Really love the go between you and Styxian, great commenting. The piece can’t be denied for it’s steaminess, it’s like watching a flick, tight

Interesting….hey, a thousand bucks is a thousand bucks. I’ve never been one for contests but you never know…..thank you!!

Hope you are doing well and thriving this Friday 13th!!!

I’m interested dearest Cipher it’s pretty cool you’re doing this I miss DU a lot I’m happy you are here ❤️

Hey both of you…

I was thinking of the logistics of such a contest…

I don’t even know how many former DUP members would be interested…

So I am thinking of doing maybe just an open book contest, not necessarily former DU members…

Will keep you posted…

You are really good at short story writing. You caught the attention and kept raising the stakes. Oh man its good.

Passionately penned, Betty. Amazing storytelling my friend. This write is also hotter than two demons fucking! lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hot Erotica Star! xx

hello dearest ME I myself don’t know where my poems come from this a great glance into your soul ❤️

Thank you, Damian! Highly appreciated “)

This is a hell of a write, my friend — very powerful; but I see a typo, I think, when you wrote, “In a battle of write and earse” when I believe that last word should be “erase,” yes?

Also, you may not be aware of the big LISTEN button that now lives on this page and no doubt many more of yours as well as many others who labour but are not aware of our unwanted AI reader who has hitch-hiked on the work of everyone who has not attached the #excludetx tag to their work.

This is quite mind-blowing.

I admire the punchy and reflective lines through each stanza.

I can sense this is a personal piece, it describes an emotional journey taking place.

It is enlightening and tragic at the same time.

A pleasure to take in. x

Dude…This is a kick ass piece. Your writings always intrigue me.

That carries a stark rhythm, the triple negation (“no man shall endure nor beast”) gives it a biblical, almost covenantal tone. The phrase “monstrous loneliness” works well because it personifies isolation as something with appetite and form. Appreciate you.

A great mystery unfolds. The nature of the muse.
Regards James