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Read MoreYou sat on the couch, absorbed in something when I slithered onto your lap, wearing just a sundress. I wriggled around and plucked at your shirt, avoiding eye contact, and blushing a little. So, you knew. “You get cute when you’re...
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Thank you sweet Fia. Just stretching the fingers to see where they end … I appreciate you providing a venue for that exploration.
Thanks again for the kind feedback!
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Passionately penned, Betty. Amazing storytelling my friend. This write is also hotter than two demons fucking! lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Two demons fucking sounds pretty hot. (Are their wieners pronged like their tongues? WHAT?! OMG!)
Hey friend, I also appreciate you. Rock on Damian.
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Hot Erotica Star! xx
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Thank you my friend!
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You’re truly welcome, Betty. I’m published 8x over on Amazon, and I can truly say there are 2 blends of sex and erotica out there: filthy dirty sweary red hot (check out My Pregnant Pause and Joely’s Swim LIVE here) and you write that brilliantly!!! Or there’s the subtler, less crude erotica – like my BEINGS – which sells more and got 5-star amazon reviews from women readers. Might be worth you experimenting? HJ Furl xx
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Read MoreHere comes the man of mirrorsThe mirrors on the man mirroring the roomWith the furniture having a conversationA painting on the wall:A horse trampling a bouquette of flowers Horses in me, and out of me, trampling the soul. A hand of...
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hello dearest ME I myself don’t know where my poems come from this a great glance into your soul ❤️
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I believe my poems are a part of me. They come from my subconscious. 🙂
Thank you my friend for reading and support! Highly apprecited! <3
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Thank you, Damian! Highly appreciated “)
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This is a hell of a write, my friend — very powerful; but I see a typo, I think, when you wrote, “In a battle of write and earse” when I believe that last word should be “erase,” yes?
Also, you may not be aware of the big LISTEN button that now lives on this page and no doubt many more of yours as well as many others who labour but are not aware of our unwanted AI reader who has hitch-hiked on the work of everyone who has not attached the #excludetx tag to their work.
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Thank you brother for reading and the comment. Also for both the correction and exclude tag. I appreciate it! “)
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This is quite mind-blowing.
I admire the punchy and reflective lines through each stanza.
I can sense this is a personal piece, it describes an emotional journey taking place.
It is enlightening and tragic at the same time.
A pleasure to take in. x
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Thank you, Rosie C! It means so much to me. It is indeed a personal piece. “)
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Dude…This is a kick ass piece. Your writings always intrigue me.
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Thank you, Keith! Highly appreciated. “)
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Betty wrote a new post
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Read MoreYou brought out the chocolate fondue and the platter of fruit, and then, the world was audacious enough to exist. Fuckers. But I never stopped looking back at the neglected supplies, just dropped where they were. Because that’s a real kink I...
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Bravo!
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Thank you!
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write with lots of sticky layers my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. If it’s not sticky you’re doing it wrong… amIright?!
What?!
Hey. Appreciate you back sweet friend.
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Pretty sensational! xx
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Thank you darling, glad you liked it
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When I am alone and there’s no-one else in the house, I promise to turn up the soundtrack to full volume, sit back, and petrify my prim n proper English neighbours! xx
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… as I add cocoa to my coffee. (I always have. LOL)
Your decadence is showing! I am betting that no weight was gained throughout the indulgence!
You have a knack for writing what everyone can see, feel, try, without it becoming over-debauchery. It’s pin point and relatable to all, with their own wishes.
And the bluntness is real world, not fluffy and not mega-porn.
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Well damn, the skirt is short enough. I hope that shit is showing! But don’t look because siblings looking at peeking decadence is still weird in Florida!
Thank you brother. I appreciate you.I have a good handful of these pieces I want to work through before I get into longer erotica. That’s the next venture… wish me luck and keep holy water nearby to wash your eyeballs out.
Thanks for braving my food porn!
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Betty wrote a new post
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Read MoreThe house is still silent.My first thought is the last thing you said, and it haunts me all night. I know I’ll wake up aching for release, thinking about comforting your cock with my liquid aching. Everything yearns for...
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Crisp imagery as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate you too, DD. I mean, I do love me some me, so the passion is authentic.
🙂
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You’re waiting for the story to end. Oh my, this story is hot, it should not end.
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I mean, a girl can only lay in bed rubbing one out so long before she has to go be part of the world…. but thank you Fia!
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It sizzles with a touch of noir in one’s skivvies! I like it, Betty.
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Thanks my friend. Glad you liked it!
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Most erotica is as sexy as cold vomit, cliche and only appreciated by the sleaze pigs. You have this remarkable ability to reach inside the male mind and to deconstruct feral desires. It’s not something which usually moves me, but between my ankles and hips, your words always leave a tattoo. Great scribbling Boo.
You may not remember the fake Satanic Slut fake profile on DU? It was actually a gay male friend of mine. So outlandish and utterly bizarre, it was blatantly obvious a fake. And yet his inbox was awash with dribbling males. There’s another similar. Is there a moral to that? Probably just be aware of sad little men.
Rob x
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You damn me with false praise, dear Rob.
More please?
I feel like men don’t really stand a chance against me, sad or real or otherwise. You know?
Thank you my friend. I fucking love and appreciate you.
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Well, seems like you had a rough morning. Not!
As Ghosteen said, most adult poetry/prose is simply amateur porn. It takes an actual thought process to make it appealing. We use our brains too, when we have sex of any kind. So when someone can step it up to being something relatable, achievable even, for us all, then that means its good writing. So bravo to ya, for making it real for the reader. -
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Thank you my brother. The brain is the biggest sex organ, and I love that you pointed that out.
Thank you for the commentary. I absolutely adore you, and your opinion always matters.
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Oh my. Oh my my my! Well hello Betty!
This was quite the experience to read! That sweet spot of a dream and feeling completely immersed.
Having those fantasies or dreams gets the heart going amiga. This takes vivid cardio exercise to another level.
I felt the frustration of the alarm. Noooooo!And I love that bright smile of yours- after reading this I see why! Hahaha. No one does this better than you!
I’m so happy to see ya posted:)
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Hey lovely one! Thank you for the kind words.
Yeah, fuck the alarm, like, why does it always go off right… then?! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!It’s good to be posting. I’m not sure where I’m going. Maybe longer erotica in the future. For now just reposting the few prose erotic pieces I had from in the day. Thank you for being here supporting my pervert brain! LOVE YOU GIRL!
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Oh those 9 minutes of the snooze button…
So I almost read this while at work but upon reading the title, I opted to come back at a later time and I’m glad I did (I can’t risk people walking up behind me while read this kind of work, clutching my pearls).
Amazing. It’s every man’s fantasy and daydream, the peak of sexuality and longing wrapped up in such a hot scenario.
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Wally, that would have been a disaster! I’m glad you avoided the pearl clutching my friend.
You know I’m pro run for everything. So run your ASS off! Glad to have helped with your cardio, sweet friend.
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You are really good at short story writing. You caught the attention and kept raising the stakes. Oh man its good.