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Read MoreHey girl.You’re about 21,your life has just begun.And still,your smile doesn’t reach your eyes.Maybe, you’ve gotten wise;or maybe you realizedthat you don’t know where you’re going.you’ve got two kids that you’re toting;Life is hard.You’re in school and working two...
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Yeah, I’d say that it was. Thank you for reading six. xx
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Beautifully penned, PG. Excellent write with a very powerful message. Writing is therapy I agree with you completely. No matter how creative I get with a poem or lyrics there is always a therapeutic quality even as simple as getting something off my chest. Very relatable piece lets me know I’m not alone in the world. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I love that we can turn such pain into such beauty with the art of our choice.. there really is something poetic about it, ironically. Lol.
Thanks for reading my friend. xx
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PG
When the darkness surrounds you and you think of the unthinkable remember this.
You have to be alive to find peace.Death just brings death.
Now you take care and keep writing.🙏💋🙏
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Promise to keep on, keeping on! Thanks Peter. xx
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This is powerful and the images and words are delicately constructed. Always move forward PG, never look back. Well written.
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The pain I’ve endured has always been a stark reminder that I’m alive. I’m grateful for that.. always moving forward. Thank you, Vision. xx
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Great piece. There’s also a hidden but great message in here. Yes, kick your kids out of the nest. But let them know if pressure builds, if the world becomes to much, the door opens both ways and they’re always welcome. So many people commit the acts that they do, endure the abuse that they do because they have no where’s to return to
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Your muse has the answer of your being, so continue to let the words flow and live as you dream…but don’t any wooden nickels, are flying monkeys.
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Read MoreMy mind is a mess,and usually i’m pretty organized.But today is a day of darkness,no more sunny skies.It’s mostly cloudy, the world’s gone gray.Would it be worse, if I asked you to stay?I don’t want to be in my...
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I love this because, the dark is my friend when scribbling. The dark is an embryo in the womb of the mind. Keep on, getting on with your writing.
Atticus Abbey/Adagio
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Very well expressed. It is a well-felt plea that we all can relate to. Your version is precise and captures the feelings well.
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Thank you! All good here now. xx
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Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend. Your plea is so authentic and real, and your reading expresses the emotional element of the words themselves. We all face self-doubt and our vulnerability escapes through our deepest fears sometimes. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is one captivating write. the audio and image give this a wonderful, short story vibe. Well said. Today is Wednesday and your alive…smile.
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Read MoreSome of us see the rain,more than the sunshine.And I mean, really, that’s fine..eventually you learn to appreciate it.I’ve learned to dance between the drops,as well as I’ve learned to cry in it.but like the flowers and treesI grow,...
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hello beautiful good evening this is some gorgeous writing and thought I like the idea of your tears watering the lovely seeds inside your inner garden great write ❤️
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Hello darling, thank you so much for reading. xx
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Fantastic poem and for some reason, I thought of the song, “Save The Last Dance For Me.”
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Thank you xx
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Beautifully penned, PG. Into the book it belongs. A very authentic write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, I can’t thank you enough for the kind words. xx
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Usha, thanks for reading. xx
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When loveliness and sadness combine into one. This poem shines through those teary raindrops. Marvelous piece PG.
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Thank you my dear friend. xx
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Read MoreA normal Monday morning in America, circa 1960'sMom's in the kitchenDad goes to workKid goes to school A normal Monday morning in America, circa 1990'sMom juggling three jobsDad's in jail Kid comes out of the closet A normal Monday morning in...
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sad truth dearest Keith with covid this generation has been taught to isolate great write ❤️
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Very true. Thanks Brenda..xo
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Powerfully penned, Keith. The more things change the more they stay the same. Another typical Monday.. well you know. Clever write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate it! Thanks
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Absolutely Wonderful… All around the world.
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Thank you my awesome friend. You rule!
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great write ❤️
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Thank you my friend.xo
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Simple and to the point. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes!! Very simple and to the point. Thanks
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