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Thank you, Damian
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Your writing shines. Excellent as always!
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Thank you, Keith;))
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Woow ❣️❤️🔥
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Are we speechless? 😉
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~P.G💋
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I mean, it’s a good question right?! Glad you enjoyed, thank you.
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HJ it is always such a pleasure having you in my comment section. So glad you got a good feel 😉 xx
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Passionately penned, P.G. Might I add while it did got hot in here, that this is also a very clever write my friend. Love breaking the 4th wall much? lol. That was really cool actually giving the reader a role inside the fantasy, by the way it occurs to me if you didn’t intend it that way and were somehow unaware, that I might have just opened Pandora’s box. I’m going with you intended it that way. Fantastic spill. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Haha if I told you, dearest Damian, it wouldn’t be my best keep secret anymore would it? 😉 Good eye though my friend. Your observation is refreshing!! xx
~P.G💋
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Erotica with humor woven into it hehe 😜 I like that! Bravo!
Daniel
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Daniel, thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed. xx
~P.G💋
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I am not late to this party just late in commenting. lol
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Playing with fire burns,
As these hot lines playing with us.Shh..I’ve got the keys. But not now.
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Well played out erotic scene. Loved how the anticipation bult as the story unfolded. And loved the playful reactions you had as he orchestrated your pleasure.
John
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Read MoreYou suffocate me with your sweet lies They hope that every honey suckle word that drips from your lips is truth Buying into the soft grave that has been dug out for them Instead, it feeds into their naivete Relishing the feel of...
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Tick tock
Great write Fia.
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😄 thank you Peter
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Always dig your musings my friend. This one gives me a sense of Deja Vu. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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The clock is always ticking. Never stops at all, until were dead. Great write!!
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You are right, Keith. Thank you
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreIt is not your job to fix meYou were not the one who broke meDeath has a number and coming for meYou need to walk away you cannot fix me I walked into the room and noticed youAnger and rage...
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The title hooked me in. This journey begins at the end, I hope there is a follow up poem, Fia. Enjoyed this piece.
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Thank you, Daniel. Maybe there is. Will the Angel or the Devil win? Hmm, that is the question. ;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. This write has a lyric vibe my friend. Nicely executed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damin. Lyric feel to it? I love that.;))
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” It is not your job to fix me
You were not the one who broke me ”
Blessings to you…first off.
Much respect to you during your journey through Shadow Work
Your introspection is deeply appreciated
Heavy write indeedNaaj
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Thank you, Naaj. Appreciate it.
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Read MoreABRA // CAD // ABRA(a spell to be ruined)iwhimperedyournamewith the blood still warmon my bitten lip.youheardme and smiled.—a is forthe arch of my back when you say dirty slut.b is forthe bite you promised, but haven’t given -yet.r is...
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Great song
Great write
So many amazing linesFav
unmake me
remake me
break meuntil i shine
YOU always shine in my eyes
BIG LIKE
KX AWARD
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Your words wrapped around me like silk and steel – soft praise with just enough edge to leave a mark.
I felt that “YOU always shine in my eyes”…
Careful. Say things like that too often, and I might just let you be the one to break me – slowly, beautifully – until I glow just for you.BIG tease.
BIG smile.
BIG curiosity now about how you’d like to remake me…💋
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Remaking you would be a visceral wonderland …
Stay close
Don’t waver
I’m coming for you …
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Passionately penned, Kristina. A clever write, with a touch of kink my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian… you always know how to make a girl blush just beneath the surface.
A touch of kink, you say? Just enough to pique your curiosity… or leave you wanting more?
But trust me there is a hella lot of kink in me, too much for most people to handle… hahaI appreciate you for always catching the quiet heat tucked between my lines.
Kisses in ink… 💋
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Ahh, you definitely get it.
There’s something unspeakably powerful about being taken apart… only to be rebuilt again, piece by trembling piece, more radiant (or darker) than before.It’s so good to see you, too.
Kindred souls always seem to find each other in the smoke and ashes… and maybe, just maybe, we’re the ones who know how to rebuild with a little more fire in our touch.Thank you for feeling this with me.
Let’s keep shining through the ruin, yeah?🔥💋
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Too many ropes, and leashes
But no bra..A poem that reads like too many hands touching, feeling your body at once!
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Mmm… you felt that, didn’t you?
The absence of a bra is never about clothing-
it’s about access.
About letting the words grope and graze,
like hands that don’t ask permission – just take.Thank you for reading so close…
I do love when someone touches with their mind.
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Lovely, pure seduction cascading down the page, hanging on to every word, wanting and waiting for more.
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Careful, charmer – words like that make my ink run hotter.
If you’re already breathless, you’d better keep a fan handy; I’m only on the first pour. Stay close… the next line might steal more than just your breath. 💋 It’s always so great to hear from you Wally and I am so sorry for the late reply…
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This is scintillatingly sensually alive that grabs me where the sun don’t shine and holds me there as I writhe under your spell. Truly you put the iron to the fire here my friend. And I am seduced by you.
John
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Oh John… if my words have you writhing, imagine what I could do if I truly meant to seduce you. 🔥 I’d keep you right there in that heat… until you beg to burn.
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Once again you’re a great storyteller and I always enjoy the dialogue you write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian