You always out there working for fellow writers, Fia. Appreciate you.

Damian

It’s freaking awesome, girl

hello lovely Fia can I have the link to the magazine? this is great…

This is amazing. I felt this in my core

Powerfully penned, Cipher. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I love the amphibian analogy, Cipher. The geography of your piece is appealing. Here’s to your journey down below!

The last line hahahaha 😆
Therapeutic sex all the way!!!!

For you..no need to ask. Thank you xoxo

Haha. Yeah, got to love the Hussle. Great ink.

Passionately penned, Fia. As per normal you know how to heat up the kickoff to the weekend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I could only smile at the ending. Seems like he had you effed up. Haha. Slick writing. I likes 👍

You write great imagery, Cipher!

Brilliantly penned, DK. There is always so much depth underneath these saucy tales you weave my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Your vote: Buckle in girl. I’m getting ready to spill my guts. And it’s nothing to be proud of.

OMG, HJ. Yeah, exactly like that. Come over here and lick it off. I feel like feeding you.

This is one scorching story. Outstanding. Your a talent DK.

Well, M’Dear 🌺

Let me start with this: “GULP!”
Nowhere is there a “fiction” tag … thus, as wonderful as it is to imagine it’s all or partly fact (and, I’ve read every chapter through “Back In The Kitchen”), your unrivaled gift as a master raconteur has drawn me into every stunningly vivid detail of each breathfilled, thrumming moment, as though I’m alive in each character’s skin.
It’s truly staggering how erotically graphic and honest to reality the entire timbre is, all without a smidgen of disgusting ugliness … it’s entirely not in WHAT you write, but in HOW you write it, how you put, how you make it come across as though it’s all as humanly natural as one slipping into their shoes … as though it’s exactly what I’d do and how I’d act under the same circumstances.

And, in addition, not a grammar, syntax, or diction gaffe in the lot … sighhh! Writers like You could put editors out of business, make editing arcane.

Oh, well … here I go again hogging all the air, wearing thin my welcome. Let me close with a very-very sincere, “Thank you, Lady-DK, for the sheer enjoyment of sharing your phenomenally rare prowess with a sparkling pen, Our Exemplarily Skilled Writer!” ⁓ Richard🖌

PS: in a lull, drop by my place to see what I’ve been up to of late … hint-hint! ; )

Love those opening lines. The write felt like an emotional rollercoaster like most situations like those are. Great ink.

Clearly, I’m late to the show, but whew loved every second of this read.