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Read MoreI bowed down to the demonOne too many timesWhat little soul I have leftseeps into the dead earth Blood trails of hopegathered in a shot glassto taint and warp Beauty is the deceiverand I love to be lied toStaring off into...
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Thank you, Daniel;))
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Read MoreCommunity- Comradery - CommentsWriting, putting the work in & finally posting so others can read it, can be a bit unnerving. One of the goals of StarsRite is to become a community that communicates!Poetry is subjective to the interpretation...
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I like how you open up with being together in the sky and the passion they have together is felt on the earth
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The background on this piece… I found Silk (writing site) very soon after I got married and moved to MS. Sam spotted me right away, and I had a handful of other friends in erotic literature. Everything came crashing down after the affair with Dan was discovered. I disappeared from SILK for many months, having no intention to return – not exactly a priority. After things settled between me and Andy, I wrote this poem and went back to SILK to post it. Naturally, the first person to see and comment was Sam.
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Wow, Now I am your first person to comment here.
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Wink!
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Yeah, I was in a low place when I wrote this. Things have turned around considerably. Thanks for checking it out, Adira!
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Just put a collar and leash on him. Leave the bed at home.
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You’re welcome
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Read MoreIsn't it funny when you're younger, and people tell you that the moon has a way of reminding you of the past? Sitting here on this window sill I can't help thinking about Devin. How, in one night, I...
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Thank you, Atticus;))
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Thank you, Hj I really appreciate you saying that.
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Thank you ,Adira. It was fun;))
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Bravo, Fia! Masterful writer you are!
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Thank you, Danial (giggling)
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You are correct. Thank you 😊
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“Hope gathered in a shot glass…” Now that line made the poem in my opinion. Bravo as always, Fia.