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thank you graciously beautiful Fia I just love him ❤️
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Fantastic!
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thank you graciously dearest Adagio for being here my attention in the site was waning due to lack of interaction… I appreciate you deeply today ❤️
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I love the rock god!!!
So many great lines in this but I absolutely love flame of fright!!
Cheers to the darkness!-
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hi beautiful Adelphina thank you so much I felt like I was hitting my flow by that time I’m glad you liked it ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Always a great write when music is involved in the story. Excellent work my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian yes he is an inspiration thank you for digging it ❤️
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I love the commanding voice in this poem! It isn’t a passive admirer; she’s a “Mistress,” an active conjurer of lust. The use of words like “Hexaba,” “culted lust,” and “sanctify the rite with orgasm” is brilliant for creating that sense of forbidden, consuming desire. A passionate wicked piece.
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hello lovely poetess good evening thank you graciously for the love on this write ❤️
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Rob Fuckin Zombie Brenda!! Have you ever listened to White Zombie’s early material from the 1980’s? I personally think it’s horrible. Check it out if you haven’t. Awesome piece of writing. Love the chick…Sexy!!
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Really intense images.
I definitely saw a scene of the occult unfolding in these words.I both admire and fear witches.
Regards James
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he dearest James good morning thank you and don’t worry I’m not a practising witch though magic seems to come naturally from me have a good day today ❤️
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Phenomenally penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously my friend my writing isn’t everyones cup of tea but you make me feel cared for thank you ❤️
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Read Moreinside I crash into your energysmashing, cunted brillianceshining danger I can't resistinfidelity of the soulmy honesty is invaded by your darknessit seeps into my sorrowyour marred imageit makes me flinch what you call goodmiserable truth I hate the feelingof...
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Love the depth and layers in this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian forgive my late response I find myself slipping of as of late ❤️
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Hello Crims!
I like the old-timey vibe of this. I wish there was more along this type actually. It just seems to set a nice tone when reading. Like those before us perhaps. At any rate, this is a wonderful poem that you’ve presented for us.-
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hello dearest Styxian good evening I’m happy the language of this write spoke to you it was how it presented itself the poem I mean thank you so much for letting me know ❤️
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Hey crimson!
The last line is a dark but beautiful visual. It gives me a Celtic vibe.
It starts off with wonderful bits of love then changes tone.
I love the word pairing of sweeping crimson. It’s like a red wave of devotion.Love your stuff chica:)
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hello beautiful Adelphina good morning thank you graciously for such a lovely comment❤️
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hello lovely poetess thank you graciously ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously my friend ❤️
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Rock on, Love this crimsin