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NAVINA posted in the group National Poetry Month
THE STORM’S EYES
Tornado you seek
The darkness
I feel weak ..
The skies in complete blackness
Your power I’ll see all week.Clouds move like spilled ink
On a grey canvas
That I left to streak
Brushing with slugs
As an artist, you can’t peek.My art smears as the storm claims
Bold dark colors
Watch how it fades
I’m happy…Read More![]()
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hello dearest Brandon good morning thank you graciously I’m happy you like it ❤️
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This reads almost like an invocation, a chant of summoning. Much enjoyed this. As Brandon said, it invites rereading 🧡
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hello beautiful Willow thank you lovely one I appreciate you thoughts these just uncurrents of feeling rising ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undertones my friend. I concur with Willow and Brandon. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreBack aches Feet throbs Vision strain Headache driving one insane We came up with the saying “the tough get it done” I’m done… We as a society, on a whole Are charcoaled steak Extra well, with no tenderness in sight
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I like steak well done, but the current steak situation…inedible, unpalatable and unacceptable. Perfectly executed
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Thank you, Willow:))
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I agree with Willow. Well done meat but our current situation is beyond repair. Nice work!
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Thank you Vision:))
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We as a nation have had tough times in the past, but I can totally understand your sentiments. Everyone is getting on the same wavelength. We all know things aren’t going good. There are many factors involved to.
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Thank you Tim, for seeing that
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Well said!
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That you Adel:))
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For a moment we was like this is a fed up person, then this person has been flocked, nothing but sheep. Tight
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Correct. Thank you Me:))
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I smell a Pavlovian steak!! Well done, Fia! “)
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Haha Thank you M.E;))
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Mic drop, Cuz!
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The last line lands in a way that makes you want to reread this again, and let it linger. This caught my breath.