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Read MoreNo rain tonightThe room is hot, too hotStill air and the smell of dampness creeps through my windowI'm alone and far away from homeMy life is now a chain of broken dream roomsI like it that wayI can't go...
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Thank you Brenda. Appreciate it. xo
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Death makes life easier somehow…. WOW….now why didn’t I think of that
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Hello Sam. It does, but then we can’t write poems or stories anymore. Thanks for the feedback.
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Visions this goes deep. I could feel the emotions of the narrator as he spoke. Fine work.
John
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Thank you kindly for the inspirational feedback here.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This read like a letter left to fuck with cops kinda vibe. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That was sort of what I was going for. Great observation my friend.
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Read MoreAs the full moon is risingin the misty nighthe visits the dead oneswith love in sight The graveyard soil he shoveto dig up and disemboweldigging the dustcraving for lust He opens the coffinwith trembling handsto fulfill his desiresand satisfy his demands The...
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hello dearest Keith so dark you know they always look best in gray ❤️
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HA! Yes they do. Thank you Brenda..xo
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man. You rock!!
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Read MoreThe gates of hell are opened againRitual of Enoch is waking the deadThe priest is lifeless; it's time of the endMalevolent spirits dwell in the graves The zombies are lurking into the fogHungry for flesh and thirsty for blood City of...
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Zombies, always wondered why they stopped eating. If a bite turns them why continue to chew. Hmm? Nice
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Thanks Fia.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Nothing like an old fashioned zombie flick. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciated. Thanks for all the feedback you send my way!
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hello dearest Me great darknened offering you know this is exactly as demons work they hijack an unsuspecting and play out their lust then when the dupe is thrown into jail they bounce onto the next one…some magics are untraceable and leave no signature as some do ❤️
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Hahaha, much like us humans also, user and abusers of our own. Thanks Lady
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Well to walk this earth dead already as people act oblivious seems to be right in today’s world. The temptation to taste the blood in that stanza seemed too strong to resist
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Since the blood is the life force of the flesh maybe that is why the living dead hunger for it so. Thank you Lady
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Aww can we be bipolar together…I can smell the roses, and you can smell the blood. Love the rotation
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hi dearest Keith Happy Birthday?
this is very good but dark ❤️