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hello dearest Styxian thank you graciously I think you’re right about the vibe…I wonder about how many lives I’ve lived with some of the words I come up with it’s a thought ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read More“The Ev Queen watched in terror as her children was forced to their knees While throughout a gem illuminated chamber echoed her painful pleas, “A majority of the Ev Queen’s flesh was embedded in stone Unable to interfere when the...
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Read MoreI’m lost in between the heavy beats of her mystic heart Like an echo reverberating without response Falling into an infinite void of dreamless sleep In a reticent ephemeral reconnaissance But I’m fully immersed in the bliss of this abyss Awake and aware in...
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Wonderfully done, Wally. Your rhyme scheme is clever and precise. And the write flows very well. Plus the message itself is almost serene with it’s approach.
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Thank you Styxian. Lately I found myself writing while more listening to music and different wave of emotion seems to compel these spills.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. Always appreciate your visits.
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Read MoreI quickly grab the scapelTo demonstrate an exampleThe 1st cut is done like thisVertically from the wristThen I start to mangleSomething near my anklesCollapsing on my kneesAfter I slice my achillesShowing my true colorsI slash at my jugular Bleeding...
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This is interesting. It has a turn of the century vibe to me for some reason. Like someone standing in a crowd, but the only person getting the whole scenario’s message from the one on stage. Your use of powerful words makes it impactful, but not bloated. Great job Crims.