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    Time (part 1)

    Is it time I guess it’s time for me  to give you information you see Because I don’t know how I was going to work this day Everyday is not like yesterday I know that you’re surprised I decided to do this at this moment Why I...

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    • Powerfully penned, Fia. An excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Congrats on writing for 30 days straight that couldn’t have been easy. I don’t think I could do it. Appreciate you, Cuz.

      Damian

      • Thank you Damian. Well, I actually did this poem free verse on the street walking to work. Its longer than this but I stopped here.

    • The inevitable impulse. The opening – “Is it time / I guess it’s time for me / to give you information” – creates a tension between the inner calling and hesitation. The subject doesn’t decide: time decides for him. It’s almost an involuntary confession.

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  • Ignited

    You threw the match on gasoline
    It was always flammable
    It’s stable if not bothered
    You did it, though
    You struck the match
    Watch it light
    Then threw it.

    Did you doubt it would light?
    Did you want to see if it was destructive?
    You knew it was
    The temperature is hotter the closer you get
    I advise you to stay away
    Let the…Read More

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    Gasoline

    You threw the match on gasoline It was always flammable It's stable if not bothered You did it, though You struck the match Watch it light Then threw it. Did you doubt it would light? Did you want to see if it was destructive? You knew it was The...

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    • Hi Fia, what is the time zone which is being shown in this site. Can you make it universal pertaining to local time of member. Could you give me statistics of how many members so far joined and readers are from which country. I am just trying to analyse your good effort to be with success.
      Thank you
      Jessy Jacob ❤️

    • hello lovely Fia these are powerful emotions you wrote brilliantly about…anger is difficult to me because I have written angry poems to vent… you express yourself very well ❤️

    • Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write that explains the fury of being wronged my friend. Nicely done as always. This one has teeth and your words bite. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Explosive write to say the least. Those who like to watch things burn don’t know how bad the heat may get.
      Nicely done.

  • ???

    I sit before you
    Blank
    Random thoughts
    Incoherents sounds
    Nothing
    Absolutly
    Empty

    Candle lit
    Shows shadow
    Places to hide
    Alone

    What is happening
    I do not understand
    I’ve scaled walls before
    Beaten away the void

    I dont like this
    Alone
    My thoughts
    Have jagged teeth
    Tearing at me
    I hold it back

    I sit here b…Read More

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