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Read MoreAs odd as it may seemThis reality is only a dreamLike millions of insects freezing to deathSociopathic is my mathematicsThe final answer is zeroC'mon, you'd love to be the superhero The processed foods of your laborsHave decayed into diseaseAnd the...
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Thank you Damian.
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Ahh the processed food we consumed is decayed in desease…why was I eating when I read this. Good one. Good visuals
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Stay away from processed foods. They will debilitate you and eventually kill you! Thanks Fia!
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Read MoreIf you could disappear, I'd be a happy manWhat does not kill you, only makes you much more vulnerable for the next time Take a huge bite of my psychotic addictionCome a little closer, I'll knife you in the kitchenConsequences...
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Oh man the enemy is within. Only you can break yourself down. Good spill
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Appreciate that Fia. Thank you!!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent exorcism my friend. Seriously, in this instance that’s what I’d call this amazing write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Some of my pieces I feel I’m possessed. When the writing session is over, I go back to my laid back, humble ways. Thanks man.
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Love it when you’re SO dark, Mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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Hello HJ. I thank you for the generous comments here. The darkness comes out every so often. Happy that you enjoyed this.
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Read MoreOur world as we know ittwisted brick by brickA world so twisted we kill our healthy and heal our sick Against our mother, pro all nature we bleed with vile religious crazeAll for war-induced pharmaciesin a 2 feet blinding maze This...
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As always we read the piece first, then wondered what it would sound like. You never disappoint Lady, this is tight, that first stanza screams
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Thank you for reading and listening! 🙏
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Epically penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics with a powerful message and being a rock/metal guy I love the arrangement. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian!
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I’m truly blown away by this.
I’m reading it as I’m listening to the audio clip.
This is a talented piece of art.
So articulate in its own way. I love it! x
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Thank you so much for your kind words Rosie! It really means a lot 🙏🏻
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I found most of them cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s great.;))
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cool idea!
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Thank you 😊 🩷
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Interesting
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Thank you ;))
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Damian was the one that stood out right away. Interesting, I don’t think I’ve seen a puzzle as a poem before.
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Thank you. I just wanted to have some fun with finding the writers in a puzzle.
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Read MoreIntimacy left the bedroom, drifted quietly down the street. Wanting only human closeness, with no intent to cheat. It wandered past the neighbours, took a shortcut through the park. Noticed couples leaning inwards, who had not lost their spark. It walked backed twenty paces, sat beside a nameless...
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian…..watch out for those Gnomes.
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I love the idea of this, the imagery. The whole gnome part almost, but not quite, adds a whimsy to it. Yet the despair overcomes that brief slide towards “not so bad”. The ending is perfect. The whole write is great stuff.
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Cool write Peter. Very creative.
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian