You need a Murad

very nicerrrr

yes nice

The end of days, this is a very interesting write

Powerfully penned, Drieks. Great flow and nice imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Some very strong images. Good write.

Time…It takes time for her to come around. Nice poem

Do those fortune cookies come with dinner?.. dont want take out… I want to go out.. interested?

If she’s holding out…maybe it’s for someone else. Just a thought.

Naaj

I know exactly what you mean Sam.
Seems like it’s a common issue for men and woman in long term relationships, particularly if over a certain age.
Most of my older male friends often wonder where their Harlot went and was replaced with Mother Superior.
It too will.pass …. everything does.

Show her the poem?

I’m bad about giving advice. I kinda agree with Naajir. I’m curious what went wrong. But I liked your poem.

I don’t know.. you seem to have a good experience with this pregnancy thingy… or at least you want to … so you tell me… (Am I still a contender??? or you found a volunteer already??… I’m late aren’t I????)

yes modern man has been trying to understand modern women since the dawn of modern civilization … we’re still out of modern luck… why the fuck can life be simple and we fuck when modern urges happen… I hate modern days

This is rhythmically beautiful.

Thank you Adira. It means a lot coming from you.

Phenomenal lyrics, Drieks. Fits well with music. You two work well together. Appreciate you.

Damian

If I heard this on the radio, I’d go buy it. Fantastic lyrics & rhythm