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Read MoreYou sat on the couch, absorbed in something when I slithered onto your lap, wearing just a sundress. I wriggled around and plucked at your shirt, avoiding eye contact, and blushing a little. So, you knew. “You get cute when you’re...
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Thank you sweet Fia. Just stretching the fingers to see where they end … I appreciate you providing a venue for that exploration.
Thanks again for the kind feedback!
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Passionately penned, Betty. Amazing storytelling my friend. This write is also hotter than two demons fucking! lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Two demons fucking sounds pretty hot. (Are their wieners pronged like their tongues? WHAT?! OMG!)
Hey friend, I also appreciate you. Rock on Damian.
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Hot Erotica Star! xx
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Thank you my friend!
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You’re truly welcome, Betty. I’m published 8x over on Amazon, and I can truly say there are 2 blends of sex and erotica out there: filthy dirty sweary red hot (check out My Pregnant Pause and Joely’s Swim LIVE here) and you write that brilliantly!!! Or there’s the subtler, less crude erotica – like my BEINGS – which sells more and got 5-star amazon reviews from women readers. Might be worth you experimenting? HJ Furl xx
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Read MoreTonight, the storm was flying off the handle, her body hardening in my hands a bit of rigor would do you... Saying. "Mama, may I?" With the hip flask of her naked anatomy containing the formaldehyde of her evermore....
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Whew, chilling. The mind reacting to itself. Creative way to explore the tension between control and chaos, intimacy and decay. I’ve never been much of an introspective writer; at least I’ve never sat down and said I’m going to write in that way. And while your piece is indirectly introspective, given the abstract images, it does make me think. its the way you show a mind caught in strange, looping thoughts while trying to make meaning of overwhelming feelings. Anyway i’m rambling, this was short and sweet.
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Thank you, Kay. I don’t see the sense in writing if one is afraid of words. I wrote only because I enjoy it.
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Read MoreThe inkwell black obsidian lake in this tomb, absence of lightand I, the quill dipping ink before shadows fracture my wakecorrupting my mind's cathedralbuilt of pillars and insomniacs with an aftermath screaming insanity settling in a heavy shroudthe sun...
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I enjoyed addin my part dearest Adagio I like how this came out thank you for the invitation ❤️
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You are most welcome, Brenda.
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I enjoyed adding my part dearest Adagio I like how this came out thank you for the invitation ❤️
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Crim is a legend. Great collaboration you two.
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Thank you, Nick.
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Read MoreLeaving the lights on in heavensucking the blood from my veinsuntil I bleed, castrated by bladeridding me of my vice as I sit flamesextinguishing me of my desiresforever where there is coldon purgatory’s treadmillfiery embers lick at my feetblinded...
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Thank you for another great collaboration experience, dear Atticus! You have and inspiring impact on my creativity!
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It was the both of us, and I should thank you.
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congratulations you two this is excellent ❤️
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We thank you, Brenda.
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Read MoreNo Michelangelo am Imy hands, turning to stonearcheology of my breath dissolving reaching tomorrow's fate of cold tongue naked and unadorned, no taste for chivalry or the ego of my hands disappearingat my lover's grave
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A dark and thought provoking poem. Coldness is a very expressive metaphor for transience. And this is exactly what we are – mortal. Facing the cold grave, there will be nothing left the but the Eternal soul. We should care for it at least as thoroughly as a knight does for his armor…
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Thank you, Elke.
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You are really good at short story writing. You caught the attention and kept raising the stakes. Oh man its good.