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thank you graciously beautiful Fia I just love him ❤️
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Fantastic!
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thank you graciously dearest Adagio for being here my attention in the site was waning due to lack of interaction… I appreciate you deeply today ❤️
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I love the rock god!!!
So many great lines in this but I absolutely love flame of fright!!
Cheers to the darkness!-
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hi beautiful Adelphina thank you so much I felt like I was hitting my flow by that time I’m glad you liked it ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Always a great write when music is involved in the story. Excellent work my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian yes he is an inspiration thank you for digging it ❤️
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I love the commanding voice in this poem! It isn’t a passive admirer; she’s a “Mistress,” an active conjurer of lust. The use of words like “Hexaba,” “culted lust,” and “sanctify the rite with orgasm” is brilliant for creating that sense of forbidden, consuming desire. A passionate wicked piece.
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hello lovely poetess good evening thank you graciously for the love on this write ❤️
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Rob Fuckin Zombie Brenda!! Have you ever listened to White Zombie’s early material from the 1980’s? I personally think it’s horrible. Check it out if you haven’t. Awesome piece of writing. Love the chick…Sexy!!
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Really intense images.
I definitely saw a scene of the occult unfolding in these words.I both admire and fear witches.
Regards James
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he dearest James good morning thank you and don’t worry I’m not a practising witch though magic seems to come naturally from me have a good day today ❤️
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Read MoreArrived hand in handNo standing in line Got our backstage passLet’s make it lastNo stadium seatingOutside beneath the stars. Music’s ready to start We’re downing crown & cokeHe steps a little closerI’m moving a little slowerNah we should go fasterBaby...
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Fine, Metallica it is, when next we bed together. What!
I prefer Black Sabbath, but that’s some dark shit. I’ll get all trippy on ya. LOL -
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Promises promises.
But I prefer to listen to Taylor Swift! Hahaha
As long as I’m with you it doesn’t matter:)
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this is badass beautiful Adelphina and we both about rockers tonight… this is really cool ❤️
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Thank you Crimson! My first concert was Aerosmith.
When the song Train Kept A Rolling came on the crowd went crazy!!
Left a lasting impression.Thank you for stopping by lovely:)
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Haha this is so cool. I can not tell you how many mosh pits erupt at the last Metallica concert I went to. From opening bands
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Hahaha. I just moved out of the way. lol.
I love all the anarchy of it. Music has a way of taking you there!!!
Thank you for the snaps!! Woop Woop!!
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Into the book it belongs! Gotta love a musical write that appreciates the mosh pit! Excellent work my friend. I knew Mark would bring up Sabbath! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Of course he’d bring up Sabbath. Hahaha
He’s not a swifty fan, so I had to tease him about it. lolThis was a fun write.
I had the whole scene in my head playing out.Thanks for your snaps amigo!!
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Girl, this has so much spirit in it. Sometimes the “just for fun” ones actually light up the room. Big smiles all around on this one.
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Hi Willow!! Long time no see chica:)
I’m so happy you stopped by for a comment!
This one kind of wrote itself. I love when that happens. That high is addicting! lol
And that it made you smile is a bonus:)Thanks for stopping by!
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Read MoreBat wings emerge From the heart's aortas Caged inside a red rose Metallic skeletal frameBusting out of the box A Pandora Aurora Of sweeping blue green Blazing fiery flames Flying with the...
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Sugar skulls and dragons, haha that is a piece.
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Hey! I’m on my lunch break. lol
Thank you for your snaps on this. Woop Woop!
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This is wild and intoxicating! It’s like a fantastical flight through desire, danger, and celebration all at once. An exploration of the tension between freedom and restraint, beauty and ferocity. The title even makes me think of those sugar marshmallow pops…sweet, colorful, and totally irresistible–mirroring how the poem balances whimsy with intensity.
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I love this comment!!
I was thinking about a whole other dimension where Sugar Skulls and dragons coexist. lol
It would make a great comic!!
Thank you for you support:).
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Just the write amount of spookyness for the run up to All Hallows Eve .. and if I’m not mistaken a teensy taste of gentle & most tasteful sensualness too .. Very nice indeed Ma’am .. Neville 😎👍
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Hi! I think Sugar Skulls are very sensual with a hint of edginess. I love incorporating beauty and darkness. Nothing too overbearing. Just got to find the right tone and balance. I also love dragons! Yes, I’m a huge fan of Game of Thrones.
Plus I was talking smack to my fiancé about wanting a moped with sugar skulls then he said he wanted one with dragons. Hahaha.Thanks for snaps on this Neville!
P.s. my best friend’s name is Nellie.
I had to do a double take when I read your name. lol-
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My pleasure entirely my friend .. N 😎👍
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey Damien! Thank you my friend:)
This was a fun one to write
I had a mini movie going on.
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Look at you becoming a regular! What!
Hey, don’t forget who has hooked you up pretty good with Pandora stuff! Yeah, the guy with all the dragon tatts. LOL
I’m so glad that you’re taking some time to post in here. This one (and the summary, grrrr. LOL) is a fantastical read with oodles of imagery filling our brains. Clever and well thought out, lover.
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Did you just type the word oodles!! Hahahaha
That is so cute!! Guess what. I love you oodles!! Hehehe
Thanks for the love big sexy!I love your dragon tatts. You have oodles! Hahaha. I’m so funny:)
MWA!!!
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Come doodle oodles over me. What!
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Just wait pal. I’ll doodle oodles while eating noodles. Hahahaha
I know. Cheesy but it’s all I got. Lol-
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Okay, as long as I get to pet your poodle…
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Ooohhh!! Hahaha. Speechless right now. 😅
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Rock on, Love this crimsin