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Read Morethe darkest of the dark rest notignoring the lull of oblivionpulsing a low humlike a hammer on the doorbehind the veil of darknessstill countingthe monster crept in reveaing its facesa woman beautiful but deadlyso strong in power even I...
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![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
Thank you for asking for my collaboration, Brenda. The dark side is my anvil, banging in my noggin.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Adagio this was my dream last night…your part is so right on and beautiful thank you ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda & Adagio. Amazing collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
It’s fantastic, Brenda.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
good evening dearest Adagio thank you graciously the song put me in a slightly hypntic state beinging forward what was aready in my thoughts thank you very much ❤️
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
The whole piece is great but that opening line is magic.
It also reminds me of the movie Dune.
The desert sands look so smooth and soft.
My older son told me once they remind him of butter. lolMark and I had a conversation today about the Sahara desert and how years ago it had an oasis.
How time and the earth can shift!I think I’m inspired now to write about the desert!
You rock chica!
Thanks for all of your inspiration!-
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hello beautiful Adelphina you have a lovely soul and I love where your inspiration took you… I was listening to the song I shared and went into a hypnotic state and landed in the desert in Enoch the angel Michael was ordered to bind his brother Azazel with a chain in the desert who is specifially talking here I am unsure… sometimes I channel what I hear….but that it took you to such a beautiful place is wonderful perhaps to that place before the problems in the Garden thank you sweet lady ❤️
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![Profile picture of Styxian]()
Cool stuff, Brenda. I like the imagery that you pulled together. It has an almost looming presence overwatching it.
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hello dearest Styxian thank you for picking up the vibe of this write I don’t always like what comes through but am bound to write as I hear…this I believe in part to be Azazel talking thank you for your thoughts ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with amazing imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Adel. Amazing write with nice word play my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hey Damien. Thanks buddy.
Sometimes i tend to panic just a bit! lol
I need to just chill about!
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![Profile picture of Benjamin Scraps]()
“Just stick it directly into my neck and eyeball, doc!” I always said. Dental work makes for quality mental training at handling pain. It’s not just the pain, but the sounds of scraping, spit sucking, and smell of drilled bone. It can make for serious anxiety. But dentistry has come a long way….I coulda slept through that last root canal. Practically a massage compared to the one I had 20 years ago. I was kinda disappointed, really. I’d been dreading it all day. Seemed like a waste of perfectly good dread, tbh.
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
I’ve had one filling in my life. And they called it more like a stain than a cavity.
He talked me into letting him do it without any anesthesia. It went okay. But this new dentist I’m going to found
a couple of cavities and I’m going to get the shot. To say I’m dreading it is putting t mildly. lolThanks for stopping by!
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![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
I just had two root canals but swallowed several jiggers of Novocaine.
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hey Adagio! I’ve never had it so I’m curious but wary. lol
I hate shots – always turn my head so I can’t watch the procedure.
I can’t do that this time! Hahaha. I’m stuck!Thanks for stopping by!
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
I love this sigh floating away on a blueberry sky beautiful ❤️
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hi Crimsin!
That was one of the first lines i wrote when i got started on this write.
The rest I had to work for. I had this write in my head for two days. lolIt’s always a pleasure when I see you on my page chica:)
Thanks for stopping by!
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![Profile picture of Honoria]()
Dear A,
Great piece. I enjoyed the parallel imagery of the sweet and the pain. I don’t like a lot of things but I especially don’t like people fiddling around in my mouth! I feel your anxiety. The good news, it’ll be over before you realize it and then bring on the sweets. Awesome formatting and refrain. “give me some of that
novocaine
make it sweet sweet sweet
like sugarcane” I intend to sing that for applicable situations. I’ll give you the street cred but that’s too delicious. Great write. H🌷-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hi H! Oh it’s so awesome to see you on my page. I’ve missed you:)
I had that phrase on loop in my head. Had to put it down on paper so it would let me rest.
I’m so glad you enjoyed.
Sing away lovely!
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![Profile picture of Styxian]()
But it’s the sugarcane that got you in this predicament! My poor baby!
What a great rappish write you have here. It’s like you’re bringing some street cred to the dentist, as a warning to them. LOL
It’s going to be okay, you’ll see. And the payoff is worth it. You have a million dollar smile, so take care of it.
Oh and hey, what a great avatar pic you have! I wonder who just randomly took a facetime pic of you as they were talking with ya, and it turned out perfect! I know art when I see it, baby.-
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Hi babe! Ughhh. I’m dreading it as you know.
I’m flossing daily and brushing twice a day. I’m not an avid flosser but I’m changing my ways!
Plus I need to get me another water pic! The first time I used one I didn’t realize how strong it was. lol
I ended up giving myself a facial! Water went everywhere until I got used to it.
Once I even managed to squirt the bathroom ceiling. Hahaha.Thanks for the pic sweetie. Even though it drives me crazy when you randomly decide to take a FaceTime pic!
But I can’t be mad at you cause I love you ya know.Love you and get ready for a phone call.
No pics!!!! 😁
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![Profile picture of Styxian]()
Hey you took some already today!!! As long as we continue to allow each other to say “delete it”, all is fair!
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Fair is fair until you cheat!
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![Profile picture of Styxian]()
Cheat?! I have a better eye for awesome than you do. My fiance is way hotter than your fiance! So there’s me being right again…. lol
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hahahaha. I literally have no comeback! Grrrrrr
Let me think…….my fiancé is way taller than your fiancé!
And don’t be insulting my eyes! They can be fierce!
They see just fine thank you very much!
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![Profile picture of Tim]()
Hey Adelly. I have no cavities but I do have a tooth whose face fell off. Luckily it’s where you can’t see it. 🙂 My dentist died a couple of years ago, (he was in his eighties) he was great. He could give you a shot without you seeing it by holding his hand up a certain way. It never hurt either. Good luck with your fillings.
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Well howdy Tim!
It’s been a long minute amigo!
So happy to see you on my page.I went in for a general cleaning and low and behold I have a couple of cavities.
They said better to take care of now before they get out of hand.
I know they are right but still! Needles still freak me out.Thanks for stopping by!
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
Ugh, I hate going to the dentist! It’s worse than going to the doctor for me. The bounce back and forth between Novocain and sweet was fun. The one led to the other 😂
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
I agree! But since I don’t want to end up with
dentures when I’m older I gotta face the Novocaine music! lol
I’ve been pretty lucky with my teeth considering how much sugar I eat.
So I’m putting on my big girl pants and getting it over with.
It ain’t cheap either!This was fun to write:).
Nice to see you Willow.
Thanks for stopping by chica!
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The dentist and I have an agreement: he stays in his building and I stay in my building several miles away. It’s a good arrangement. As for your poem, I felt the sting of the needle when you got jabbed, but the Novocain felt cool going in. And I need to thank you for the fuzzy tongue that lasted about 2 hours. If, as I believe, poetry is supposed to make you “feel”, your poem succeeded wonderfully, Adelphina.
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Hahaha.
Hi Curt!
I wish I could stay several miles away but my fear of being toothless when I’m eight keeps me in line. Lol
It was a fun vent write. I am not a fan of the dentist. Never have been but I’ve seen people with an abscess tooth.
That scared me more lolThanks for topping by for a read amigo!
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![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
Only a poet of your talent can make the prospect of a dental appointment into a celebratory playful delight. I loved reading this. The sing song rhythm just had me totally feeling it.
John
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hahaha.
Welp, I am a huge chicken of anything that has to do with the dentist.
But I want to keep my teeth when I get older so you do what you gotta do! Haha
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![Profile picture of I_IS_ ME]()
Hahaha, love the way that you saw and add a little comedy to the situation. Just relax dental is a part of overall health, simply twist one before your visit. Tight
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hi Me! Dude I panic! I feel my heart rate speed up when I’m in the parking lot. Hahaha
I know I need to relax it’s easier said than done!
I don’t want to be toothless when I get older so I go but yikes!Nice to see ya around!
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![Profile picture of Brandon Houser]()
You do a great job in putting the reader in this
I can feel the anxiety. Well done!-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hey there. I have real dread when it comes to a dentist. Lol
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![Profile picture of Brandon Houser]()
It’s never really pleasant is it? Lol
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write with lots of layers my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian