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Read MoreI don’t know if you love me anymore.But I know I love you—and I still lust for you.Even after all these years,after the weight we’ve both carried,after the silence between us.I want you.I don’t know how to begin,as if...
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Thank you for your supportive comments Peter.
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The yearning is palatable. I hope it goes well.
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Read MoreThe world is a bit colderThe street a bit emptierWithout your voiceWithout your hand to hold.
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Read MoreMy eyes open, to the imagined. My eyes closed, to the real. My ears open, to hallucinations. My ears closed, to your voice. My mouth open, to ramblings. My mouth closed, to anything sensical. My hand open, once to yours. My hand closed, now to yours.
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Indeed, everything changes. I would suspect, or at least in my own life, the choice to switch what I am perceiving is all interconnected.
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Das ist ein sehr schönes Gedicht, Daniel! Ich kann mich absolut damit identifizieren.
The use of opposites is the perfect stylistic device to underline the fact that in our dreams and illusions we are most alive! Brilliant!
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I understand completely the words you put together about a subject I know quite well.
I’ve written similar pieces and shown my wife, hoping for a spark to keep the fire alight.
Hope your terrific composition has more success than mine.