I think this is the lightest piece I’ve read of yours. I’m almost in shock. lol. This carries a quiet, restrained reverence, the kind that honours memory without dramatizing it. The echo of cadence against the waves lingers long after the last line. Loved it.

I appreciate that, sincerely.

One of the purest you are, Brenda when it comes to
excavating the realms of intimacy. So, so enamored with this vibe…you get it!!

Poetic love always

Naaj

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend, I concur with Naaj. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

There is a sweet aching vulnerability to strip away the artifice and stand still long enough to be seen. This is beautiful, Crimsin.

This is filled with intimacy. We all look for a sanctuary to feel cherished. Loved this:)

hello beautiful Adelphina thank you graciously for a very beautiful comment have a great day ❤️