Brilliantly penned, DK. There is always so much depth underneath these saucy tales you weave my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Your vote: Buckle in girl. I’m getting ready to spill my guts. And it’s nothing to be proud of.

OMG, HJ. Yeah, exactly like that. Come over here and lick it off. I feel like feeding you.

This is one scorching story. Outstanding. Your a talent DK.

Well, M’Dear 🌺

Let me start with this: “GULP!”
Nowhere is there a “fiction” tag … thus, as wonderful as it is to imagine it’s all or partly fact (and, I’ve read every chapter through “Back In The Kitchen”), your unrivaled gift as a master raconteur has drawn me into every stunningly vivid detail of each breathfilled, thrumming moment, as though I’m alive in each character’s skin.
It’s truly staggering how erotically graphic and honest to reality the entire timbre is, all without a smidgen of disgusting ugliness … it’s entirely not in WHAT you write, but in HOW you write it, how you put, how you make it come across as though it’s all as humanly natural as one slipping into their shoes … as though it’s exactly what I’d do and how I’d act under the same circumstances.

And, in addition, not a grammar, syntax, or diction gaffe in the lot … sighhh! Writers like You could put editors out of business, make editing arcane.

Oh, well … here I go again hogging all the air, wearing thin my welcome. Let me close with a very-very sincere, “Thank you, Lady-DK, for the sheer enjoyment of sharing your phenomenally rare prowess with a sparkling pen, Our Exemplarily Skilled Writer!” ⁓ Richard🖌

PS: in a lull, drop by my place to see what I’ve been up to of late … hint-hint! ; )

Love those opening lines. The write felt like an emotional rollercoaster like most situations like those are. Great ink.

Clearly, I’m late to the show, but whew loved every second of this read.

Silence is the strangest thing. I crave it, chase it…& then panic when I bump into it. Sometimes we have to force ourselves to sit still with it. Chaos is more familiar…& therefore sometimes…more comfortable.

Beautifully penned, DK. Nice balance in this write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Only one word comes to mind here…consumption.
This is one helluva write!

Guard MY heart so I don’t have to feel the ache of loneliness ever again ughhhh hahaha

Great write, Meg!

You bet it will. I’m not stopping at your back either.

Pleasurable, infectious and lovely in it’s delivery & format. Your ideas shine no matter what you write.

I do. I do.

I was trying to make the random word challenge a real pain in the ass…. You proved you can take it … wow

Fantastic ink. I like the feel of devotion, and a bit of sinister.

Meg, this was so well-written! Enjoyed it thoroughly! Wonder who the lucky man is… jealous! 😆

Brilliantly penned, DK. That was hotter than two demons fucking my friend. But the ending was clever and witty. Appreciate you.

Damian

I’m ripe for you, HJ

I have so many of your wet panties stuffed in my pillowcase. The honey like sweetness puts me right to sleep. Delicious piece DK.

An engaging write, makes the person drip in the pants. Well done!

There is some unfinished messages though. 😉

I’m actually under your bed… you left the window open

“Repeat after me… Repeat after me…”

Okay, I admit it. You’ve totally hypnotized me.
Now what are you going to do?

Whatever you want from the other side of the earth

Cleverly penned, Peter. Incredible write my friend, great first line by the way. Appreciate you.

Damian