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Read MoreYou sat on the couch, absorbed in something when I slithered onto your lap, wearing just a sundress. I wriggled around and plucked at your shirt, avoiding eye contact, and blushing a little. So, you knew. “You get cute when you’re...
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Thank you sweet Fia. Just stretching the fingers to see where they end … I appreciate you providing a venue for that exploration.
Thanks again for the kind feedback!
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Passionately penned, Betty. Amazing storytelling my friend. This write is also hotter than two demons fucking! lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Two demons fucking sounds pretty hot. (Are their wieners pronged like their tongues? WHAT?! OMG!)
Hey friend, I also appreciate you. Rock on Damian.
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Hot Erotica Star! xx
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Thank you my friend!
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You’re truly welcome, Betty. I’m published 8x over on Amazon, and I can truly say there are 2 blends of sex and erotica out there: filthy dirty sweary red hot (check out My Pregnant Pause and Joely’s Swim LIVE here) and you write that brilliantly!!! Or there’s the subtler, less crude erotica – like my BEINGS – which sells more and got 5-star amazon reviews from women readers. Might be worth you experimenting? HJ Furl xx
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Read MoreCome closer,listen.I need you to hear this.The world is at war.I know it is so,because truth was the first to fall.Fact has become fiction,fiction turned to fact.Seeing is no longer believing,and truth no longer matters.Everything is fake,everything a conspiracy,everything...
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I think the button has already been pressed … nice one
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Spot on in fact. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Spot on..you nailed it..it’s here and most of us are in denial..great write
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Thanks for reading guys….you already knew the war had started….
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Some things are just crying out to be written down and shouted out loud .. This is just one such thing .. I couldn’t agree more sir .. maybe we should form a cult or summat .. Neville 👍
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Shout it, say it quietly, repeatedly. No means NO. I loved every line. I’ll be sure to check out your catalogue.
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Read MoreYou brought out the chocolate fondue and the platter of fruit, and then, the world was audacious enough to exist. Fuckers. But I never stopped looking back at the neglected supplies, just dropped where they were. Because that’s a real kink I...
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Bravo!
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Thank you!
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write with lots of sticky layers my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. If it’s not sticky you’re doing it wrong… amIright?!
What?!
Hey. Appreciate you back sweet friend.
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Pretty sensational! xx
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Thank you darling, glad you liked it
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When I am alone and there’s no-one else in the house, I promise to turn up the soundtrack to full volume, sit back, and petrify my prim n proper English neighbours! xx
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… as I add cocoa to my coffee. (I always have. LOL)
Your decadence is showing! I am betting that no weight was gained throughout the indulgence!
You have a knack for writing what everyone can see, feel, try, without it becoming over-debauchery. It’s pin point and relatable to all, with their own wishes.
And the bluntness is real world, not fluffy and not mega-porn.
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Well damn, the skirt is short enough. I hope that shit is showing! But don’t look because siblings looking at peeking decadence is still weird in Florida!
Thank you brother. I appreciate you.I have a good handful of these pieces I want to work through before I get into longer erotica. That’s the next venture… wish me luck and keep holy water nearby to wash your eyeballs out.
Thanks for braving my food porn!
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Read MoreIf God can act and does not,that is a choice.If God wants to act and cannot,then his power has limits.If God both can and wants to,Why does suffering exist?If God neither can nor wants to,Why call him God? Pain persists.Adjust...
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Age old dilemma, for sure. I’ve asked this myself of all sorts of scholarly or “intelligent” people.
I steer clear of knocking the powers of a god-being, because some do indeed have faith in such. More power to them.
But, life has made me quite cynical. Therefore, I choose to believe in power of mankind as the true source of hopeful change.
Prayer is a fine form of meditation. Solutions come during that pause of…-
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Thanks for reading.
I agree entirely with your view particularly that praying sometimes brings solutions though not from a divinity but from ourselves.A peaceful quiet meditation works fine for me…. mostly.
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I like this, and coming from someone who grew up in a conservative faith, as I got older I began to see things differently. Folks change the words to fit the narrative so that they can claim they are backed by divine power. It’s a scary thing.
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Wally; Yep!
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You are really good at short story writing. You caught the attention and kept raising the stakes. Oh man its good.